16. Kane’s Odyssey by Jeff Clinton


TRANSCRIPT of Bradbury v. Bickham
Madame Register: Oyez, oyez, oyez! All those having business before the Court of Scientifiction Plagiarism, attend and ye shall be heard.
Judge Gernsback: (sighs) Mr. Dick, what is this, the hundred-and-seventieth time?
Dick: (stands) Your Honour, my client, Mr. Bradbury, cannot help it if he finds himself–due to his enormous talent–the repeated victim of plagiarism. Justice must be done in each and every case.
Judge Gernsback: Oh Lord… proceed.
Dick: Thank you, Your Honour–
Elwood: Objection! Will my esteemed colleague please stop putting “u” in all his words? This is America!
Dick: Can’t be helped, Your Honour. I am Canadian. It’s part of my culture. To censor me is discrimination.
Judge Gernsback: Overruled. Mr. Elwood, as you so rightly state, this is America, and we have never, nor will ever, discriminate against any person in a court of law. Clear?
Elwood: (mumbles in American)
Judge Gernsback: Mr. Dick, please proceed.
Dick: Thank you… Your “Honour”.
Judge Gernsback: Don’t push it.
Dick: Er, right. Well, my client asserts that in the year 1976, Mr. Jack Miles Bickham–pen name Jeff Clinton–did willfully and with full knowledge of his actions, plagiarize my client’s novel Fahrenheit 451 in his own novel, Kane’s Odyssey. I anticipate that you will hear evidence to that effect over the course of these proceedings. Now, if you will observe this cover by Kelly Freas…
Cover

Dick: I would like this entered into evidence as Exhibit A–
Elwood: Objection! No element of this cover bears even the slightest resemblance to Fahrenheit 451!
Judge Gernsback: Sustained. Mr. Dick…
(whispering between plaintiff and counsel)
Dick: (stands) Ahem… Your Honour, we withdraw the request. (sits)
Judge Gernsback: Mr. Elwood…?
(whispering between defendant and counsel)
Elwood: Your Honor, we would like this entered into evidence. We belief it supports our case that the Work In Question was not plagiarized.
Judge Gernsback: Very well. Continue.
Elwood: Major elements included in this cover are the portrait of Rufus himself, bottom-right. His farming community is shown front and centre. Behind are the trees, lit by a sickly yellow sun. And beyond them, the city, war-torn and mutilated. In essence, the entire story is told from right-to-left, foreground-to-background. Rufus goes on his journey from farmer to wildlands fugitive to urban rebel. This is as succinct a depiction of the story that it’s a wonder we don’t throw this case out right now!
Dick: Objection: hyperbole.
Judge Gernsback: Overruled. Mr. Dick, this is a court of scientifiction; being hyperbolic is standard process. We have hyperbolic generators in the basement, in fact. Mr. Elwood?
Elwood: Defense rests.
Dick: “Defence” rests.
Judge Gernsback: Mr. Dick, just because we respect Canadian sovereignty and language, doesn’t mean I won’t hold you in contempt.
Dick: Sorry, Your Honour.
Elwood: Defense calls Laser Books’ Marketing Guy to the witness stand!
Blurb

Rufus Kane is a born rebel. Forced to flee from the tightly controlled life of an isolated commune, he finds safety in a large city. But his dream of freedom to live is soon shattered. He is betrayed by a friend and his incredible trial reveals a society gone mad. Law and order are absolute, human rights have surrendered to fear. Hope has vanished from the world. In this exciting tale, Jeff Clinton is at his storytelling best. Rufus becomes a rebel with a cause: the creation of a world fit for men!
Elwood: Now, MG–may I call you MG?
Marketing Guy: Why not? Everyone else does. (glares at plaintiff’s counsel)
(chuckling from audience)
Elwood: Well, MG, do you see any parallels between Rufus’s journey, as described by your words, and the plot of Fahrenheit 451?
MG: ‘Course not. Rufus is an active protagonist from early on. He resists the constraints placed on him from the beginning. And he’s not engaged in any sorta book-burnin’.
Elwood: Mm-hmm. And would you say he is a stronger driving force in the story than Montag in Fahrenheit, especially when comparing the first third of both books?
MG: Absolutely–
Dick: (stands) Objection: leading the witness.
Judge Gernsback: Sustained.
Elwood: MG, I put it to you, that this story, in fact, bears no resemblance to Fahrenheit at all–
Dick: (stands, leans over table) Objection! You Honour, we have not entered plot or character into evidence at this time!
Judge Gernsback: Sustained! Mr. Elwood, this is your final warning.
Elwood: Defense rests.
Dick: (steps around table, clasps hands behind back) Marketing Guy, would you call yourself a Bradbury fan?
MG: I would.
James: And you are thoroughly familiar with Fahrenheit 451?
MG: I am.
James: Then answer me this: doesn’t Montag stash books at the beginning of–
Elwood: Objection. By his own admission, the plaintiff’s counsel has stated that Story has not been entered into evidence.
Judge Gernsback: Sustained–Mr. Dick, you will play fair or stand down.
Dick: Then I move that MG’s testimony be stricken from the record, because his words have never revealed anything of the Laser Books’ content and so can have no bearing on these proceedings!
MG: You bastard! I’ll kill you! (witness climbs over the stand, cries of dismay from audience)
Judge Gernsback: (bangs gavel) Bailiff! Bailiff! Remove the witness at once! Remove him!
MG: (being dragged from the courtroom) He’s got it in for me, y’hear?! The Dick wants to ruin meeee!
(doors slam)
Dick: (under his breath) You’ve done that yourself…
Interlude: A Brief Recess
TRANSCRIPT cafeteria conversation, Dick and Elwood
Elwood: Do you ever think you go too far?
Dick: On the contrary, I don’t think I go far enough. (mastication) This is a capital mac n’ cheese.
Elwood: Come back to Earth, Jim. At most you’ll be able to prove Subconscious Influence. You yourself are guilty of that in writing your own novel, Seekers of the Fallen Stars.
Dick: Yes, yes, Dune influenced some pretty obvious elements of my book: race memory, ancestral voices, mind-altering substances–and I didn’t even realize it till after I’d written the chapters.
Elwood: Subconscious Influence. Take it or leave it. (beat) Be reasonable for once. You can’t win.
Dick: Says you.
Story

Dick: Your Honour, I’d like to enter Story as Exhibit C and state my case.
Judge Gernsback: Done, and do so.
Dick: Your Honour, what it all comes down to is six points:
- Rufus is an indoctrinated member of a society where thoughts are controlled and reading material is banned, hidden, or destroyed.
- Knowledge proves the unlocking of his mind and the reorientation of his worldview
- He becomes a fugitive from those who seek to constrain his mind
- He finds refuge among those with the knowledge he seeks
- He confronts his own society
- He becomes a rebel and flees, just in time to see the city burn down behind him
Dick (cont’d): When I first read Kane’s Odyssey, even then it did not feel original, but when I compare it against Fahrenheit 451, I find the similarities striking. Truthfully, if I was in the business of reviewing science fiction novels, I would simply tell people to read the latter and ignore the former. Rufus’s story is a parallel to Guy Montag’s in virtually every way.
Dick (cont’d): The worst technical offence in this book occurs in chapter five, where Mr. Bickham stops the story to give a ten-page future history lesson that borders on the absurd! By myself I found ten implausibilities in this chapter, but my brother, an historian, could doubtless tear that whole chapter to shreds. Granted, I largely felt engaged throughout the novel, never felt the need to put it down, but against Mr. Bradbury’s work, there is simply no contest; it is a candle compared to a house fire. (sits)
Judge Gernsback: Mr. Elwood?
Elwood: (stands) Ahem, Your Honor… the defense would like to call… Mr. Ray Bradbury to the stand.
(pandemonium in the courtroom)
Judge Gernsback: Order! I will have order!
(plaintiff stands, walks to the witness stand)

Elwood: Mr. Bradbury, I believe I speak for everyone in this room when I say it’s an honor to meet you.
Bradbury: (smiling) Oh thank you. Thank you very much.
Elwood: In fact under other circumstances I’d ask you to sign my copy of Something Wicked This Way Comes.
Bradbury: I’d be happy to.
Elwood: But for now I’d like to discuss another of your books–not Fahrenheit, but The Martian Chronicles.
Dick: (stands) Objection–relevance?
Judge Gernsback: Mr. Elwood, if you have a point to make, make it quickly.
Elwood: I shall. Mr. Bradbury, I have a short excerpt here from your acceptance speech at the 2000 Medal for Distinguished Contribution to American Letters ceremony. It’s only a paragraph, would you please read it aloud for the record.
Bradbury: Let me see… (reading, laughs) Oh yes, I remember…
I arrived at the YMCA, the Sloan House, moved in there for $5 a week and proceeded to show my short stories to editors all around New York City, but nobody wanted my short stories. They said, “Don’t you have a novel?” I said, “No I’m a sprinter. I’m a sprinter.” But finally I had dinner my last night in New York with Don Congdon and Walter Bradbury, no relation of mine. Walter Bradbury at Doubleday. And sitting at dinner that night he said to me, “Ray, what about all those Martian stories you’ve been writing in the pulp magazines during the last 10 years? Don’t you think they would make a novel if you wove them together in some sort of tapestry and called it The Martian Chronicles?” I said, “Oh my God.” He said, “What do you mean?” I said, “I read Winesburg, Ohio by Sherwood Anderson when I was 24 and I said to myself, ‘Oh God, wouldn’t it be wonderful if someday I could write a book as good as this but put it on the planet Mars.’”
Elwood: Mr. Bradbury… would you say that you plagiarized Mr. Anderson’s book to write The Martian Chronicles?
Bradbury: Certainly not! No aspect of The Martian Chronicles is copied from Anderson’s book.
Elwood: But by your own admission, you… drew inspiration?
Bradbury: The uh, the “pattern”, if you wanna call it that, was drawn from Winesburg. Anderson showed me how I might go about stitching my Martian short stories into a cohesive novel.
Elwood: And you did it rather successfully. So, would you contend that it is possible to be influenced by a story–follow its structure in your own work, even–without it being considered plagiarism?
Bradbury: (shrugs) Isn’t that how all stories are born?
Dick: (groaning) Oh God…
Elwood: (shrugs, addresses courtroom) Well, if Ray Bradbury says it, who are we to argue?
(laughter)
Elwood (cont’d): Oh, one last question, Mr. Bradbury: who was it who suggested you sue my client?
Bradbury: Well, my lawyer of course.
Elwood: Can you point to him?
Bradbury: Sure. (points)
Elwood: Madame Register, let the record show that Mr. Bradbury has identified James Dick. The defense rests.
Conclusions and Recommendations
Judge Gernsback: Each party will now have a chance to make their closing statements, and since this is a court of scientifiction, grandiose pontification is not only welcome, but encouraged. Mr. Dick?
(whispering between plaintiff and counsel)
Judge Gernsback: Mr. Dick!
Dick: (stands) Counsel rests… (sits)
Judge Gernsback: Very well. Defense?
Elwood: (stands, straightens tie, clears throat) Your Honor, ladies and gentlemen of the court, this case could–and more properly should–be called Dick v. Posterity. We are not here because Mr. Bradbury seeks justice. We are not here for the benefit of the literary world. We are here so that one man can salve his conscience.
Elwood (cont’d): Mr. Dick, by his own admission–on multiple occasions–has plundered countless works of fiction across every genre for his ideas. Arthur C. Clarke, Patrick O’Brian, Clive Barker, Tim Powers, David Twohy–these are just a few of the artists whose ideas have been pilfered by this common thief. In fact, if there was any true justice in the world, he would be the one having to defend himself!
Elwood (cont’d): (sighs) But thank God–thank God–there is room for nuance in this world. No story is created in a vacuum. I’m sure if we could call the cave-dweller who decorated Lascaux to the stand, we would learn that they were influenced by the Sherwood Anderson of cave paintings!
(laughter)
Elwood (cont’d): If we curtail creativity because a creator reimagines old ideas, we cut humanity’s storytelling potential by half. And consider what you’ve heard here today: The Martian Chronicles would not exist without Winesburg, Ohio, just as The Terminator would not exist without Harlan Ellison‘s “Soldier” and “Demon With a Glass Hand”. Yes, there will be many, many cases where the reimagining is vastly inferior to the original, but every now and then, the reimagining exceeds the original, and prompts new ideas, new creations. The potential far outweighs the drawbacks, but only if we learn to draw the line between plagiarism and inspiration. (sits)
Later
Judge Gernsback: In the matter of Bradbury v. Bickham, I find insufficient evidence of plagiarism as defined by law. Mr. Elwood, please inform Mr. Bickham he is free to go.
Elwood: Thank you, Your Honor.
Judge Gernsback: Mr. Dick, I’m of half a mind to cite you for wasting this court’s time. I’m surprised at how you’ve conducted this case, and I should be very worried if you were my counsel in a case such as this. But this time I’ll let you off with a warning. Pick your battles more carefully, please.
Dick: I will, Your Honour. This has been a humbling experience. And if I may… I have some pages here–something I wrote–which I think would make a great fit for your own magazine, Amazing Stor—
Judge Gernsback: Overruled. Court’s adjourned. (slams gavel)
Who’s Next?
TRANSCRIPT telephone conversation, Bradbury and Dick
Dick: Sorry ’bout today, Ray.
Bradbury: Elwood had a point, you know. Can’t go around fighting everyone who creates something inspired by something else. Maybe take this as a lesson: free yourself to be inspired more by the works you meet rather than less, and experiment with others’ ideas to see what you can come up with.
Dick: I guess so. Thanks, Ray.
Bradbury: You got another case coming up?
Dick: As a matter of fact…

Bradbury: Goodness! What a cover! What does the blurb say?
Blurb
Sam Church is a trained killer, a member of the infamous Red Roadmen organization. In the bizarre world of this future America, the Roadmen’s word is law; to incur their displeasure is death. But Sam Church refuses to kill and is imprisoned and tortured by his peers for his nonconformity. He escapes and, in a terrifying race across the continent, clashes with the Roadmen in a running duel that can only end in death – his own or that of the system of tyranny that reigns on The Black Roads.
Bradbury: Well, we’ve certainly seen ideas like this before. But why don’t you give this Joe fellow the benefit of the doubt?
Dick: You know what? Maybe I’ll do just that…
Bradbury: Something else, Jim?
Dick: I’d just like to say… The Martian Chronicles… the story of how that book came to be was a huge inspiration for me to start pitching my own Europa Trilogy as a fix-up. In fact, your work consistently gives me the confidence to accept that there’s no right way to get my foot in the publishing door. If Europa does come out in the same format… I hope you’ll take it as the compliment it’s intended to be.
Bradbury: Wouldn’t take it any other way. Good luck to you.
Dick: You too, Ray. We miss you.
Addendum
My Goodreads Review for Kane’s Odyssey
From the Case Notes of Bradbury v. Bickham
This is a novel of a kind which has been seen countless times in science fiction canon: the “Good German” (an authoritarian, book burner, etc.) suddenly awakens to the injustices of his society and breaks free of the thought controls which bind him. He goes on to become a rebel and fight for the cause of knowledge/life/free potato chips, whatever. It’s basically Plato’s Allegory of the Cave. The problem is that Ray Bradbury perfected this story with Fahrenheit 451. This tale has been remixed, rebranded, and repackaged as films such as Equilibrium and The Matrix. Do yourself a favour, and read Fahrenheit 451. The essential plot has not been bettered since.


















































































































