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  • Laser Books Review 16

    Laser Books Review 16

    16. Kane’s Odyssey by Jeff Clinton

    TRANSCRIPT of Bradbury v. Bickham

    Madame Register: Oyez, oyez, oyez! All those having business before the Court of Scientifiction Plagiarism, attend and ye shall be heard.

    Judge Gernsback: (sighs) Mr. Dick, what is this, the hundred-and-seventieth time?

    Dick: (stands) Your Honour, my client, Mr. Bradbury, cannot help it if he finds himself–due to his enormous talent–the repeated victim of plagiarism. Justice must be done in each and every case.

    Judge Gernsback: Oh Lord… proceed.

    Dick: Thank you, Your Honour–

    Elwood: Objection! Will my esteemed colleague please stop putting “u” in all his words? This is America!

    Dick: Can’t be helped, Your Honour. I am Canadian. It’s part of my culture. To censor me is discrimination.

    Judge Gernsback: Overruled. Mr. Elwood, as you so rightly state, this is America, and we have never, nor will ever, discriminate against any person in a court of law. Clear?

    Elwood: (mumbles in American)

    Judge Gernsback: Mr. Dick, please proceed.

    Dick: Thank you… Your “Honour”.

    Judge Gernsback: Don’t push it.

    Dick: Er, right. Well, my client asserts that in the year 1976, Mr. Jack Miles Bickham–pen name Jeff Clinton–did willfully and with full knowledge of his actions, plagiarize my client’s novel Fahrenheit 451 in his own novel, Kane’s Odyssey. I anticipate that you will hear evidence to that effect over the course of these proceedings. Now, if you will observe this cover by Kelly Freas

    Cover

    Dick: I would like this entered into evidence as Exhibit A–

    Elwood: Objection! No element of this cover bears even the slightest resemblance to Fahrenheit 451!

    Judge Gernsback: Sustained. Mr. Dick…

    (whispering between plaintiff and counsel)

    Dick: (stands) Ahem… Your Honour, we withdraw the request. (sits)

    Judge Gernsback: Mr. Elwood…?

    (whispering between defendant and counsel)

    Elwood: Your Honor, we would like this entered into evidence. We belief it supports our case that the Work In Question was not plagiarized.

    Judge Gernsback: Very well. Continue.

    Elwood: Major elements included in this cover are the portrait of Rufus himself, bottom-right. His farming community is shown front and centre. Behind are the trees, lit by a sickly yellow sun. And beyond them, the city, war-torn and mutilated. In essence, the entire story is told from right-to-left, foreground-to-background. Rufus goes on his journey from farmer to wildlands fugitive to urban rebel. This is as succinct a depiction of the story that it’s a wonder we don’t throw this case out right now!

    Dick: Objection: hyperbole.

    Judge Gernsback: Overruled. Mr. Dick, this is a court of scientifiction; being hyperbolic is standard process. We have hyperbolic generators in the basement, in fact. Mr. Elwood?

    Elwood: Defense rests.

    Dick: “Defence” rests.

    Judge Gernsback: Mr. Dick, just because we respect Canadian sovereignty and language, doesn’t mean I won’t hold you in contempt.

    Dick: Sorry, Your Honour.

    Elwood: Defense calls Laser Books’ Marketing Guy to the witness stand!

    Blurb

    Rufus Kane is a born rebel. Forced to flee from the tightly controlled life of an isolated commune, he finds safety in a large city. But his dream of freedom to live is soon shattered. He is betrayed by a friend and his incredible trial reveals a society gone mad. Law and order are absolute, human rights have surrendered to fear. Hope has vanished from the world. In this exciting tale, Jeff Clinton is at his storytelling best. Rufus becomes a rebel with a cause: the creation of a world fit for men!

    Elwood: Now, MG–may I call you MG?

    Marketing Guy: Why not? Everyone else does. (glares at plaintiff’s counsel)

    (chuckling from audience)

    Elwood: Well, MG, do you see any parallels between Rufus’s journey, as described by your words, and the plot of Fahrenheit 451?

    MG: ‘Course not. Rufus is an active protagonist from early on. He resists the constraints placed on him from the beginning. And he’s not engaged in any sorta book-burnin’.

    Elwood: Mm-hmm. And would you say he is a stronger driving force in the story than Montag in Fahrenheit, especially when comparing the first third of both books?

    MG: Absolutely–

    Dick: (stands) Objection: leading the witness.

    Judge Gernsback: Sustained.

    Elwood: MG, I put it to you, that this story, in fact, bears no resemblance to Fahrenheit at all–

    Dick: (stands, leans over table) Objection! You Honour, we have not entered plot or character into evidence at this time!

    Judge Gernsback: Sustained! Mr. Elwood, this is your final warning.

    Elwood: Defense rests.

    Dick: (steps around table, clasps hands behind back) Marketing Guy, would you call yourself a Bradbury fan?

    MG: I would.

    James: And you are thoroughly familiar with Fahrenheit 451?

    MG: I am.

    James: Then answer me this: doesn’t Montag stash books at the beginning of–

    Elwood: Objection. By his own admission, the plaintiff’s counsel has stated that Story has not been entered into evidence.

    Judge Gernsback: Sustained–Mr. Dick, you will play fair or stand down.

    Dick: Then I move that MG’s testimony be stricken from the record, because his words have never revealed anything of the Laser Books’ content and so can have no bearing on these proceedings!

    MG: You bastard! I’ll kill you! (witness climbs over the stand, cries of dismay from audience)

    Judge Gernsback: (bangs gavel) Bailiff! Bailiff! Remove the witness at once! Remove him!

    MG: (being dragged from the courtroom) He’s got it in for me, y’hear?! The Dick wants to ruin meeee!

    (doors slam)

    Dick: (under his breath) You’ve done that yourself…

    Interlude: A Brief Recess

    TRANSCRIPT cafeteria conversation, Dick and Elwood

    Elwood: Do you ever think you go too far?

    Dick: On the contrary, I don’t think I go far enough. (mastication) This is a capital mac n’ cheese.

    Elwood: Come back to Earth, Jim. At most you’ll be able to prove Subconscious Influence. You yourself are guilty of that in writing your own novel, Seekers of the Fallen Stars.

    Dick: Yes, yes, Dune influenced some pretty obvious elements of my book: race memory, ancestral voices, mind-altering substances–and I didn’t even realize it till after I’d written the chapters.

    Elwood: Subconscious Influence. Take it or leave it. (beat) Be reasonable for once. You can’t win.

    Dick: Says you.

    Story

    Dick: Your Honour, I’d like to enter Story as Exhibit C and state my case.

    Judge Gernsback: Done, and do so.

    Dick: Your Honour, what it all comes down to is six points:

    • Rufus is an indoctrinated member of a society where thoughts are controlled and reading material is banned, hidden, or destroyed.
    • Knowledge proves the unlocking of his mind and the reorientation of his worldview
    • He becomes a fugitive from those who seek to constrain his mind
    • He finds refuge among those with the knowledge he seeks
    • He confronts his own society
    • He becomes a rebel and flees, just in time to see the city burn down behind him

    Dick (cont’d): When I first read Kane’s Odyssey, even then it did not feel original, but when I compare it against Fahrenheit 451, I find the similarities striking. Truthfully, if I was in the business of reviewing science fiction novels, I would simply tell people to read the latter and ignore the former. Rufus’s story is a parallel to Guy Montag’s in virtually every way.

    Dick (cont’d): The worst technical offence in this book occurs in chapter five, where Mr. Bickham stops the story to give a ten-page future history lesson that borders on the absurd! By myself I found ten implausibilities in this chapter, but my brother, an historian, could doubtless tear that whole chapter to shreds. Granted, I largely felt engaged throughout the novel, never felt the need to put it down, but against Mr. Bradbury’s work, there is simply no contest; it is a candle compared to a house fire. (sits)

    Judge Gernsback: Mr. Elwood?

    Elwood: (stands) Ahem, Your Honor… the defense would like to call… Mr. Ray Bradbury to the stand.

    (pandemonium in the courtroom)

    Judge Gernsback: Order! I will have order!

    (plaintiff stands, walks to the witness stand)

    Elwood: Mr. Bradbury, I believe I speak for everyone in this room when I say it’s an honor to meet you.

    Bradbury: (smiling) Oh thank you. Thank you very much.

    Elwood: In fact under other circumstances I’d ask you to sign my copy of Something Wicked This Way Comes.

    Bradbury: I’d be happy to.

    Elwood: But for now I’d like to discuss another of your books–not Fahrenheit, but The Martian Chronicles.

    Dick: (stands) Objection–relevance?

    Judge Gernsback: Mr. Elwood, if you have a point to make, make it quickly.

    Elwood: I shall. Mr. Bradbury, I have a short excerpt here from your acceptance speech at the 2000 Medal for Distinguished Contribution to American Letters ceremony. It’s only a paragraph, would you please read it aloud for the record.

    Bradbury: Let me see… (reading, laughs) Oh yes, I remember…

    I arrived at the YMCA, the Sloan House, moved in there for $5 a week and proceeded to show my short stories to editors all around New York City, but nobody wanted my short stories. They said, “Don’t you have a novel?” I said, “No I’m a sprinter. I’m a sprinter.” But finally I had dinner my last night in New York with Don Congdon and Walter Bradbury, no relation of mine. Walter Bradbury at Doubleday. And sitting at dinner that night he said to me, “Ray, what about all those Martian stories you’ve been writing in the pulp magazines during the last 10 years? Don’t you think they would make a novel if you wove them together in some sort of tapestry and called it The Martian Chronicles?” I said, “Oh my God.” He said, “What do you mean?” I said, “I read Winesburg, Ohio by Sherwood Anderson when I was 24 and I said to myself, ‘Oh God, wouldn’t it be wonderful if someday I could write a book as good as this but put it on the planet Mars.’”

    Elwood: Mr. Bradbury… would you say that you plagiarized Mr. Anderson’s book to write The Martian Chronicles?

    Bradbury: Certainly not! No aspect of The Martian Chronicles is copied from Anderson’s book.

    Elwood: But by your own admission, you… drew inspiration?

    Bradbury: The uh, the “pattern”, if you wanna call it that, was drawn from Winesburg. Anderson showed me how I might go about stitching my Martian short stories into a cohesive novel.

    Elwood: And you did it rather successfully. So, would you contend that it is possible to be influenced by a story–follow its structure in your own work, even–without it being considered plagiarism?

    Bradbury: (shrugs) Isn’t that how all stories are born?

    Dick: (groaning) Oh God…

    Elwood: (shrugs, addresses courtroom) Well, if Ray Bradbury says it, who are we to argue?

    (laughter)

    Elwood (cont’d): Oh, one last question, Mr. Bradbury: who was it who suggested you sue my client?

    Bradbury: Well, my lawyer of course.

    Elwood: Can you point to him?

    Bradbury: Sure. (points)

    Elwood: Madame Register, let the record show that Mr. Bradbury has identified James Dick. The defense rests.

    Conclusions and Recommendations

    Judge Gernsback: Each party will now have a chance to make their closing statements, and since this is a court of scientifiction, grandiose pontification is not only welcome, but encouraged. Mr. Dick?

    (whispering between plaintiff and counsel)

    Judge Gernsback: Mr. Dick!

    Dick: (stands) Counsel rests… (sits)

    Judge Gernsback: Very well. Defense?

    Elwood: (stands, straightens tie, clears throat) Your Honor, ladies and gentlemen of the court, this case could–and more properly should–be called Dick v. Posterity. We are not here because Mr. Bradbury seeks justice. We are not here for the benefit of the literary world. We are here so that one man can salve his conscience.

    Elwood (cont’d): Mr. Dick, by his own admission–on multiple occasions–has plundered countless works of fiction across every genre for his ideas. Arthur C. Clarke, Patrick O’Brian, Clive Barker, Tim Powers, David Twohy–these are just a few of the artists whose ideas have been pilfered by this common thief. In fact, if there was any true justice in the world, he would be the one having to defend himself!

    Elwood (cont’d): (sighs) But thank God–thank God–there is room for nuance in this world. No story is created in a vacuum. I’m sure if we could call the cave-dweller who decorated Lascaux to the stand, we would learn that they were influenced by the Sherwood Anderson of cave paintings!

    (laughter)

    Elwood (cont’d): If we curtail creativity because a creator reimagines old ideas, we cut humanity’s storytelling potential by half. And consider what you’ve heard here today: The Martian Chronicles would not exist without Winesburg, Ohio, just as The Terminator would not exist without Harlan Ellison‘s “Soldier” and “Demon With a Glass Hand”. Yes, there will be many, many cases where the reimagining is vastly inferior to the original, but every now and then, the reimagining exceeds the original, and prompts new ideas, new creations. The potential far outweighs the drawbacks, but only if we learn to draw the line between plagiarism and inspiration. (sits)

    Later

    Judge Gernsback: In the matter of Bradbury v. Bickham, I find insufficient evidence of plagiarism as defined by law. Mr. Elwood, please inform Mr. Bickham he is free to go.

    Elwood: Thank you, Your Honor.

    Judge Gernsback: Mr. Dick, I’m of half a mind to cite you for wasting this court’s time. I’m surprised at how you’ve conducted this case, and I should be very worried if you were my counsel in a case such as this. But this time I’ll let you off with a warning. Pick your battles more carefully, please.

    Dick: I will, Your Honour. This has been a humbling experience. And if I may… I have some pages here–something I wrote–which I think would make a great fit for your own magazine, Amazing Stor

    Judge Gernsback: Overruled. Court’s adjourned. (slams gavel)

    Who’s Next?

    TRANSCRIPT telephone conversation, Bradbury and Dick

    Dick: Sorry ’bout today, Ray.

    Bradbury: Elwood had a point, you know. Can’t go around fighting everyone who creates something inspired by something else. Maybe take this as a lesson: free yourself to be inspired more by the works you meet rather than less, and experiment with others’ ideas to see what you can come up with.

    Dick: I guess so. Thanks, Ray.

    Bradbury: You got another case coming up?

    Dick: As a matter of fact…

    Bradbury: Goodness! What a cover! What does the blurb say?

    Blurb

    Sam Church is a trained killer, a member of the infamous Red Roadmen organization. In the bizarre world of this future America, the Roadmen’s word is law; to incur their displeasure is death. But Sam Church refuses to kill and is imprisoned and tortured by his peers for his nonconformity. He escapes and, in a terrifying race across the continent, clashes with the Roadmen in a running duel that can only end in death – his own or that of the system of tyranny that reigns on The Black Roads.

    Bradbury: Well, we’ve certainly seen ideas like this before. But why don’t you give this Joe fellow the benefit of the doubt?

    Dick: You know what? Maybe I’ll do just that…

    Bradbury: Something else, Jim?

    Dick: I’d just like to say… The Martian Chronicles… the story of how that book came to be was a huge inspiration for me to start pitching my own Europa Trilogy as a fix-up. In fact, your work consistently gives me the confidence to accept that there’s no right way to get my foot in the publishing door. If Europa does come out in the same format… I hope you’ll take it as the compliment it’s intended to be.

    Bradbury: Wouldn’t take it any other way. Good luck to you.

    Dick: You too, Ray. We miss you.

    Addendum

    My Goodreads Review for Kane’s Odyssey

    From the Case Notes of Bradbury v. Bickham

    This is a novel of a kind which has been seen countless times in science fiction canon: the “Good German” (an authoritarian, book burner, etc.) suddenly awakens to the injustices of his society and breaks free of the thought controls which bind him. He goes on to become a rebel and fight for the cause of knowledge/life/free potato chips, whatever. It’s basically Plato’s Allegory of the Cave. The problem is that Ray Bradbury perfected this story with Fahrenheit 451. This tale has been remixed, rebranded, and repackaged as films such as Equilibrium and The Matrix. Do yourself a favour, and read Fahrenheit 451. The essential plot has not been bettered since.

  • Laser Books Review 15

    Laser Books Review 15

    15. The Star Web by George Zebrowski

    I’m not crazy, right? You guys see it too?

    This has been driving me crazy for weeks now. I dodge enough bullets for a living; I don’t need sic semper tyrannis over here adding on his two cents o’ lead.

    Anyway, you guys check out this review while I check out my hat for holes.

    Nebula and Theodore Sturgeon Award nominee George Zebrowski brings us a story in the purest tradition of the Golden Age of Science Fiction. I say that without the least bit of prejudice because, at their best, Golden Age stories depicted battles of wits between humanity and the cosmos.

    Reading up on Zebrowski, I’m unsurprised to find out that, like many of our authors thus far, he wrote tie-in novels for Star Trek, focusing on The Next Generation era. Most of those works were co-authored with writer Pamela Sargent.

    Going boldly where many have gone before, Zebrowski’s Star Web articulates a classic question popularized by Arthur C. Clarke, and perfected by Andy Weir:

    Are these people smart enough to survive?

    Would You Like to Know More?

    If you spot a copy of this book in the wild, most likely at a used bookstore, buy it. It is some of the best value-for-money you can get in a book. Not only does it contain Clarke’s body of short fiction (which by itself is marvelous), it also holds one or two novel-length works which usually are published under the SF Masterworks label.

    Clarke’s importance to science fiction isn’t that he was a great storyteller (he was), or that he predicted many technologies before they were invented (he did), but that he made his readers feel that the story of the universe, of our solar system, of Earth, was their story–that no matter the colour of your skin, your sex, or your personal beliefs, you have a magnificent heritage written in the stars themselves, and no one can deny you that heritage.

    There are few tropes from the 1930s that have aged well, but this is one of them, and was used to greatest effect in books like The Martian and Project Hail Mary.

    But how well does Zebrowski employ it? Does The Star Web stand tall or fall flat? And just who is that John Wilkes Booth-lookin’ doofus, anyhow?

    We’ll find out after paying our dues to Kelly Freas.

    Cover

    Ahhh… you know that crisp, refreshing sound you get when you crack open a cold one with the lads? For some reason, that’s exactly what I hear when I look at this cover.

    Maybe it’s the cool cerulean of the aurora, or the sharp lines of the bright star in the sky. Maybe it’s the texture of the sky itself or the ice as the spaceship breaks through. Maybe it’s the gentle curves and shadows of the thready title at the top. Maybe it’s Juan Obrion’s wavy hair. Maybe it’s Maybelline.

    Whatever it is, there’s something just so soothing about this cover.

    I’ve been staring at it for so long trying to decide whether it’s one of Freas’s better covers, or more workmanlike ones. Having read the book, I can tell you that there are very few story elements present. In fact, Freas has chosen to depict a single scene from the book: the rising of the alien ship in the third or fourth chapter.

    But it kind of works. He really evokes a sense of “jumping-off” combined with a feeling of wonder. There could be anything hiding behind those curtains of light, and we’re gonna peer behind them and find out.

    Blurb

    A UN research team has been sent to the Antarctic to investigate strangely patterned radio signals. Expecting a buried transmitter, the team is awestruck by what they discover hidden beneath the polar ice. But it doesn’t remain hidden for long! The team is soon hurtling through space on an adventure that is as incredible as it is frightening. George Zebrowski, author of The Star Web, is a Nebula Award Finalist. His first novel, Omega Point, published in 1972, has already been translated into six languages.

    You pitch me a spaceship buried under Antarctica, and I’ll buy a ticket on that hotrod today.

    In the review of Birthright, we talked about tropes that always hook readers, right? “Literally-Anything-Buried-in-Antarctica” is one of them.

    I think the reason this never fails has to do with the nature of Antarctica: it’s the only continent on our planet that was never colonized by humans. There’ve been proposals and attempts, both aborted and ongoing, but the reality is there’s very little economic or political incentive to setting up shop.

    Would You Like to Know More?

    I spent three years writing for the Hearts of Iron IV submod Operation Deep Freeze. Set in the alternate history universe of The New Order: Last Days of Europe, our story depicted a fictionalized Scramble for Antarctica in which three superpowers vie for control of the “Exile Continent”.

    The events my brother and I wrote for that mod are some of my best work. We drafted hundreds of thousands of words over the course of COVID and created countless storylines and plot threads. Our research into Antarctica revealed the most astonishing things about the continent that laypeople simply don’t know.

    COVID was a shit time for humanity, but I’ll always have fond memories of my brother and I quietly going insane together as we crafted the most outlandish scenes this side of a Terry Gilliam fever dream.

    The landmass is covered in glaciers, and is routinely scraped by katabatic winds exhaled from the mountains of the interior. Assuming you can even reach the Antarctic littoral (you have to cross the Roaring Forties, which are some of the most vicious latitudes on the planet), depending on where you make landfall, you might be met with sheer walls of ice that are too high and too unstable to be scaled from sea level. And even if you make it into the continent proper, you will find cold desert stretching for thousands of kilometres–desert in which the mean annual temperature is -40 degrees Celsius.

    There is nothing there to eat except scarce pockets of wildlife. Nothing grows. Half the year is spent in perpetual daylight, and the other half in persistent darkness. It is, for all intents and purposes, impossible to survive there without great financial and technological investments.

    Antarctica is not for us.

    But it wasn’t always so inhospitable. We know from paleontological evidence that in the deep past, it was a tropical paradise, a veritable Garden of Eden. Dinosaurs prowled jungles denser than the Amazon. Flora proliferated and learned to survive seasonal frosts without dying. All of that is still there, buried and fossilized under hundreds of metres of ice.

    It’s no secret why stories of horror have been set there: the essence of cosmic horror is that human existence on planet Earth is bracketed by beings far older and more powerful than we are, that we are comparative newcomers to a vast and ancient stage.

    This is entirely true from a paleontologist’s point of view.

    While there is definitely some fear in Zebrowski’s novel, it is not the chief emotion which The Star Web elicits.

    That would be wonder.

    Story

    “Wonder” indeed. As in, wonder at the fact that this is the first Laser Book that’s less than the regulation 190 pages in length.

    I’m serious, this is completely unheard of! Every single book in this series, up until this point, has been ~50,000 words long, and exactly 190 pages in length. These are the guidelines set by Harlequin.

    So how the hell did Zebrowski get away with subtracting 13 pages from this novel?

    I wonder if any of the other Laser Books have the same problem. Which ones are they?

    What are their destinies?

    All joking aside, my experience of this book was much like my experience of reading Bob Heinlein‘s Methuselah’s Children: thoroughly enjoyed the first half, but found the second to be underwhelming.

    Would You Like to Know More?

    Funny story about Methuselah’s Children. The copy I had was a paperback older than the Antarctic dinosaurs and the binding was crumbling. The pages of this little book were literally falling out as I turned them. So when I read the book, I placed a wastepaper basket next to my bed and let each page fall in as I finished reading it.

    If you can cast your minds back to the very first Laser Book review, for Thomas F. Monteleone‘s Seeds of Change, you’ll recall that I wrote that that book felt like two stories Frankensteined together: one was Logan’s Run, and the other was a gripping tale of scientists figuring out the workings of an alien spacecraft. I also suggested that, to salvage that tale, you’d simply have to peel the disparate stories apart and let them grow into their own books.

    Zebrowski clearly had the same idea, because he took the spaceship plotline of Seeds and did exactly that.

    The story follows four UN scientists, led by our protagonist, Juan Obrion (the John Wilkes Booth-lookin’s doofus), who try to unravel the mysteries of a structure found beneath the Antarctic ice. The structure is in fact an ancient alien spacecraft, buried under the ice for untold millennia, and before you can say “Geronimo!” the scientists find themselves trapped in the spacecraft as it hurtles away from Earth at relativistic velocity.

    Suddenly, unraveling the vessel’s mysteries is no longer an academic exercise, but a matter of life and death.

    This is where the story is at its strongest. Are these people capable of thinking like beings which are far more intelligent than humans? Can these supposedly educated people use rationality and logic to puzzle out the workings of this ship while simultaneously batting aside their preconceptions and biases?

    These kinds of stories are a dime a dozen from the Golden Age, but seldom do GA authors demonstrate the deftness and detail that Zebrowski demonstrates–which makes it all the more frustrating when he falls victim to cliche.

    The Journey of the Spacecraft

    Look, if you’ve read these two books, you can probably guess where Star Web is heading.

    The vessel taps into an interstellar network of tunnels–the titular Star Web–and navigates to its native port: a berth hidden inside a blue giant star. Obrion and co. learn that the builders of this spacecraft eventually eschewed space travel altogether in favour of stargates.

    Would You Like to Know More?

    It never ceases to amaze me how often this trope is used in sci-fi to denote an advanced civilization: thousands of doorways scattered across space, connecting thousands of different planets in a sort of galactic metro system. We’ve even seen it used in this very series with Gates of the Universe.

    The Expanse, Star Trek, Contact, and 2001: A Space Odyssey all had some version of stargates, but in my opinion, no story did it better than the TV series named for the device.

    If you’ve not seen this show, I heartily recommend it. It’s a classic of science fiction, and one of the rare examples when a spinoff of a feature film (Roland Emmerich‘s Stargate) turned out smarter, funnier, and more exciting than the original. With ten seasons and two films, and featuring a friggin’ army of Canada’s finest screen talent, you are guaranteed two hundred hours of wonder, laughter, chills, and thrills.

    The spacecraft, like the Monolith in 2001, like the wormhole in Contact, takes the scientists on a tour of its builders’ history, from their humble beginnings to their tragic downfall. The spacecraft itself is a character–it has goals, opinions, beliefs–and is an intriguing part of the story, but ultimately, Zebrowski doesn’t do anything really novel with the concepts he explores.

    Conclusions and Recommendations

    I will never say no to Antarctica, spaceships, aliens, or combinations thereof.

    Some of my favourite tales in this genre involve scientists puzzling out the workings of extraterrestrial technology.

    My favourite video game–perhaps my favourite piece of media period–Outer Wilds is about the unraveling of a millennia old mystery.

    My Goodreads Review

    All the things I love in a sci-fi tale are present in the Star Web, and there is much to recommend in this novel, but unfortunately, the tropes which Arthur C. Clarke and Carl Sagan plumbed to such a great depth in their magnum opuses are recycled too easily in this novel. I would like to give The Star Web a solid 3.5 out of 5, but since that’s not possible with Goodreads rating system, a 3 shall have to suffice.

    Kathleen Sky‘s Birthright was so effective because she took tried and tested tropes and put her own unique spin on them. George Zebrowski never quite gets there with The Star Web. The novel would work a lot better if it were longer, and put more obstacles in the path of our characters: more puzzles to unravel, more secrets to uncover, more machines to figure out.

    I could recommend it, but then again, why not just read 2001: A Space Odyssey, or Contact, or watch Stargate SG-1? All those pieces of media have the same essential premise: pitting human intellect against ancient alien machines and seeing who comes out on top. This trope has been done perfectly before, and Zebrowski, strong writer though he is, is simply treading a well-beaten path.

    Who’s Next?

    Rufus Kane is a born rebel. Forced to flee from the tightly controlled life of an isolated commune, he finds safety in a large city. But his dream of freedom to live is soon shattered. He is betrayed by a friend and his incredible trial reveals a society gone mad. Law and order are absolute, human rights have surrendered to fear. Hope has vanished fromt he world. In this exciting tale, Jeff Clinton is at his storytelling best. Rufus becomes a rebel with a cause: the creation of a world fit for men!

    Ehh… I’m not gonna get my hopes up.

    Ancillary Matters

    Credit: David Twohy

    Those who’ve read my 8000-word retrospective on the Riddick franchise know what a huge fan I am of screenwriter/director David Twohy. Recently I discovered his website where he posts every screenplay he’s ever written, either on-spec or shooting, including an unused Alien3 screenplay.

    This lattermost script in particular will be of great interest to cinephiles because many of the elements he introduced in it (sci-fi prison, different versions of xenomorph, killer hounds) would later be re-used in the Alien franchise and his own films like Pitch Black and The Chronicles of Riddick.

    His scripts have renewed my appreciation for the importance of solid scripts, and how films transform and evolve in the course of shooting and editing.

    I even dropped him a line via email and he was kind enough to reply, mentioning his acquaintance with Harlan Ellison. Still super jealous you got to meet him, David!

  • Laser Books Review 14

    Laser Books Review 14

    14. Birthright by Kathleen Sky

    “I am an android.”

    Data, Star Trek: The Next Generation

    Ray Nelson kicked in the door of the second round of Laser Books with a piece of historical fanfiction that took us to the past, the future, the afterlife, and all places betwixt. Today, our next author–pardon me, authoress–steps through that door.

    The Laser Books (and indeed sci-fi in general) being such an “old boys club”, it’s a breath of fresh air every time a woman arrives to tell a tale, and to date, Kathleen is only the second female writer to submit an entry to this series, the first being Juanita Coulson‘s terrific novel Unto the Last Generation.

    I couldn’t dig up much information on Kathleen. The most comprehensive biography I could find comes from the website Worlds Without End, and it’s pretty thin.

    Kathleen Sky is the pen name of Kathleen McKinney Goldin, an American science fiction and fantasy author. Her pen name is her former married name from her marriage to first husband Karl Sky. From 1972 to 1982 she was married to fellow author and collaborator Stephen Goldin.

    Most of her fiction is romantic in nature. Her books include Vulcan! and Death’s Angel, two of the earliest original novels based on the 1960s Star Trek TV series.

    Sky appeared as an Enterprise crewmember in the recreation deck scenes in Star Trek: The Motion Picture.

    WWEnd/Kathleen Sky

    I’m beginning to see a pattern with these Laser Books authors: many seem to be, or have been, extremely active in fan circles and written much tie-in media for either Star Trek or Wars. And some, like Kathleen, have pretty sparse credits apart from said tie-in work and their contributions to Laser Books.

    Which is a damn shame, because as we’ve seen–and will see again today–many of these authors are very skilled.

    So, cue up the android memes, let’s talk about Birthright!

    Cover

    “Big things have small beginnings.”

    David, Prometheus

    First off, let me apologize for the state of this cover. Not all the Laser Books in my collection have been properly cared for, and a few are scuffed like this one. One or two have torn covers, and a lot have some of the wear and tear you see here. They don’t look too bad in person, but the HD scanner on my Canon printer isn’t doing them any favours.

    Even so, the major elements are intact. The Double Helix worshipped by the android Children of Vat rises like a phoenix behind Miranda, whose inscrutable glare really tells you a lot about her character; she’s no Golden Age sci-fi waif who needs saving.

    In the portrait to our bottom-right are two characters, Bron and Andros. Bron is the one with tattoos, and is the android foil to our protagonist (I am reticent to say “hero” because Andros is most emphatically not that).

    This is one of Kelly Freas‘s workmanlike covers, and it’s pretty barebones when it comes to representing the story, but there’s one element I want to call your attention to, and that’s the title. The word “BIRTHRIGHT” looms like a tombstone over the cover. It is, in fact, the blackest, bleakest part of the cover. If the rest of the cover filled you with excitement and hope for a gripping space yarn, the font and colour of the title take the starch out of your stride.

    It really makes you question whether a birthright is something desirable.

    Blurb

    Hey, this is another Bakka purchase!

    Anyway, blurbtime.

    In this towering adventure, Kathleen Sky has created an unforgettable character. Is Andros human or an android created by his scientist-father? Others besides Andros would like to know. The survival of an entire android civilization hangs in the balance. In his desperate search for the truth about himself, Andros discovers what terror means. But neither terror nor love will stop him from finding the answer. He must claim his Birthright.
    Kathleen Sky is a storyteller of the first rank.

    If I had a nickel for every time this trope has been used in a story, I could retire early.

    This is one of the Big Ones, a standby dating back to the earliest days of Ye Auld Scientifiction. It’s a hook that works, despite its total lack of originality. But we haven’t had a story like this in the Laser Books, so… I guess it’s permissible?

    Look, I’ve long since learned my lesson that Marketing Guy is strapped for word space and is doing the best that he can. He rarely succeeds in selling me on stories, and the real fun comes in retrospect: reading the story, and seeing how much of it he managed to mention in the blurb. It’s no one’s fault but Harlequin‘s; they draw the lines, and everyone else has to colour inside them.

    This blurb probably wouldn’t impress even the most casual sci-fi fan; it certainly doesn’t impress me. But like I said: lesson learned. I’m never going to judge the author(ess)’s work by the blurb.

    Story

    “Quite an experience to live in fear, isn’t it? That’s what it is to be a slave.”

    Roy Batty, Blade Runner

    Well, lube me up and call me Slick! That was a tightly-written tale!

    My College screenwriting teacher, Rob Corbett, said, “There are no bad stories, only stories badly told. For example, if I were to pitch you a story about a little person who travels a thousand miles to throw a ring into a volcano, you’d say, ‘Huh? What? DUMB!’ But Tolkien went ahead and wrote The Lord of the Rings.”

    A story, regardless of premise, theme, plot, or characters, is made or broken in the telling. There are thousands of incredible novels, video games, and films out there which, if you reduced them to a one-liner, would be laughable–and yet they work.

    Execution > Concept

    Burn that into your minds, because that is the equation which governs Birthright.

    Andros Roarchik is an aspiring space cadet who also happens to be the son of the finest android designer in the galaxy, Dr. Erik Roarchik. When a routine medical check casts doubt on whether or not he’s human, he suddenly finds himself without job prospects and the victim of assault by every Tom, Dick, and Harry at the academy. With his future growing dim, his one hope is to go to his late father’s factory on the planet Mhalkeri and find proof that he is not an android.

    Would You Like To Know More?

    Those of us who are struggling to make our living in this most terrible Year of Our Lord 2026 would empathize keenly with Andros’s struggle.

    With the rise of generative artificial intelligence, writers submitting stories to publications around the world have been confronted with some variation on the following text:

    I submit that I DID/DID NOT use AI in the creation of all or part of this piece.

    As AI becomes more advanced, I expect such challenges to artists to “prove you are human” will become ever more common.

    But when he arrives, he learns that there is a power struggle going on between the acting head of Roarchik’s, a sleazeball named Fitzsimmons, and the androids. Dr. Roarchik, went full Tyrell toward the end of his life, and was moving androids closer and closer to humans, to the point where the two are indistinguishable from one another. The Confederation is terrified of that: they want drones working their mines and spacedocks and chemical plants, not entities which can think for themselves and have feelings.

    “‘More human than human’ is our motto.”

    –Eldon Tyrell

    Andros, whose humanity is entirely in question, finds himself at the centre of this struggle. If he can prove his humanity, he can regain control of Roarchik’s and decide the fate of the androids. If he can’t, he’ll be deactivated. Either way, he’s a challenge to Fitzsimmons’ authority, and must be removed.

    Fitzsimmons sics his android aid (andraid? aidroid?) Miranda on Andros with the intent of keeping tabs on him, and distracting him from what’s really going on. But Miranda, far from being a mere lackey, is a member of the android resistance, and the Church of Vat, an emergent religion founded by the androids. Through Miranda, Andros learns that the androids have faith, culture, politics–they are, for all intents and purposes, a people. And yet they are denied personhood by the humans who designed them.

    If this were a Golden Age story, told by one of the Old Boys, Andros would be a Moses-like figure come to lead the slaves out of Egypt, but Sky refrains from falling for such plain cliches.

    Instead, she makes Andros an insufferable, self-centred prick who couldn’t care less what happens to others. He just wants his humanity confirmed dammit! Except…

    … except it’s almost as if someone doesn’t want him to be able to prove he’s human.

    Think about that for a sec: if the son of the smartest android designer in the galaxy turned out to be an android, then the only way to claim his birthright would be to gain personhood for all androids–himself included. That’s what Dr. Erik Roarchik wanted: emancipation of his “children”: the Nexus-6–sorry, I mean, Super-Matrix androids.

    Andros is no emancipator.

    But he could be.

    We Need Brains, not Bron!

    Bron is a clever element in the story that further casts doubt on Andros’s humanity. He is an android who looks exactly like Andros, hinting that Andros himself is just another model that thinks he’s human.

    Now, all androids are supposed to be marked by tattoos that tell the world what they really are, no matter how human they look, but it would’ve been a simple matter for Dr. Roarchik to create an android and just… not apply the tattoo. If he knew his life was ending, and he saw a chance to create an heir which would have a vested interest in protecting androids (assuming he is one), he would absolutely do it.

    Bron is a delightful foil to Andros: an android with Andros’s appearance, the love of the Double Helix in his heart… and no chance of guiding his people to a better future, because he is:

    • A: Too headstrong
    • B: Not human
    • C: Involved in schismatic conflict.

    In any lesser novel, there’d be some switcheroo bullshit involving Bron and Andros, but Kathleen Sky doesn’t go in for such paltry plotting tricks. Bron is a tool, in every sense of the word, and he gets used and discarded when he is no longer needed.

    Of Androids and Politics

    One of my favourite things about Birthright is the politicking of the androids. Again, in a Golden Age story, they would present a united front to the humans: one glorious voice crying out “We Shall Overcome!”

    But in Birthright, they are, as Elrond would say, “Scattered, divided, leaderless.” The religious fanatics, the rationalists, the scientists, the street gangs, each has their own idea about how to win their freedom from humanity, but no one can agree on a single course of action.

    How very… human.

    But if, like me, at this point, you’re asking, “Why the hell was Roarchik so obsessed with making the androids such independent thinkers?”

    Once again, Kathleen demonstrates her storytelling chops.

    Drina

    For Dr. Erik Roarchik, creating a new race was an intellectual exercise; for his partner Drina, it was a megalomaniacal imperative.

    Drina has to be one of the most fucked-up characters yet seen in the Laser Books. She is the mother of Andros, but she considers–as Roarchik did–the androids to be her true children.

    Yes, Andros is human. As Drina says, it’s in his name: “andros” in Ancient Greek means “behold, a man”. She was the one who hid the documents who proved Andros’s humanity. She put him through hell just so he would come to Mhalkeri, get to know the androids–even fall in love with one, Miranda, and become their greatest advocate, so that, when he finally did prove his humanity, it would be as a defender of androidkind.

    And Drina’s plan works flawlessly. All it cost was Miranda’s life, Bron’s , and that of countless other humans and androids.

    Drina is obsessed with the creation of an entirely new race, of being the mother to that race, and she is utterly lacking in conscience. She is the kind of person who was lynched at the end of World War II–but here, she gets everything she wants.

    Conclusions and Recommendations

    “I’ve seen things you people wouldn’t believe.”

    –Roy Batty, Blade Runner

    I haven’t even had time to talk about the most horrifying scenes: the humans burning the android Nurseries, the riots in the streets, the lynch mobs, the death of Miranda. Suffice to say, Kathleen isn’t pulling any punches when it comes to violence and strife. She gets away with things I thought for sure were impossible in the Laser Books.

    My Goodreads Review

    There is a tendency for stories about AI and androids to devolve into anti-slavery narratives, which have not only been done to death, but are at best a superficial way of engaging with topics like artificial intelligence and machine life. And while Kathleen Sky is not exempt from this, she subverts expectations just enough to create a truly compelling, dark, and believable tale of a people fighting for their right to life. I am awarding this story four stars; the absence of a fifth is strictly because this story plays with an aged and well-used trope. Sky has proven her excellence.

    I’d like to underline the word “believable”. Since this is an anti-slavery story, and if you’re even slightly aware of the history of the Civil Rights Movement in Canada and the States, you know exactly how cruel humans can be to other humans who, due to melanin variations and evolutionary pressures, have darker skin.

    Now imagine that those other humans… were not human at all. They were, in fact, not born of womb. How much worse would our cruelty be? How much greater licence would we give ourselves to inflict pain, if we knew for sure the beings we were hurting were not human?

    This is an idea as old as the science fiction genre, but Sky illustrates it to devastating effect. There were points I actually had to stop reading for a minute to process the horror of what I was seeing.

    I perceive a pattern among our female Laser Books contributors: both Juanita Coulson and Kathleen Sky have written cutting social commentaries that command the reader’s attention. Their books, so far, are praiseworthy and nuanced in ways most of the other Laser Books haven’t been, and I can easily commend them to modern audiences.

    I can’t even make jokes about them! These women step up to the plate, knock it out of the park, and head home. We need more of this, dammit!

    We must bid farewell to Kathleen Sky for now, but she will be back for 38. Ice Prison. A long wait, I know, but in a very short time, Juanita Coulson shall be gracing us with 20. Space Trap.

    Looking forward to seeing you ladies again.

    Who’s Next?

    George Zebrowski‘s comin’ in ice cold with… wait a minute…

    *squints*

    Is that… John Wilkes Booth?

    Well… this is awkward; I just dedicated 2500 words to talking about great emancipators.

    *Raises voice* Hey, L., honey? Yeah, sorry, we can’t go to the theatre next week!

    … ‘why’ you ask?

    Oh, um… just take my word for it…

    Blurb

    A UN research team has been sent to the Antarctic to investigate strangely patterned radio signals. Expecting a buried transmitter, the team is awestruck by what they discover hidden beneath the polar ice. But it doesn’t remain hidden for long! The team is soon hurtling through space on an adventure that is as incredible as it is frightening. George Zebrowski, author of The Star Web, is a Nebula Award Finalist. His first novel, Omega Point, published in 1972, has already been translated into six languages.

    I have a really good feeling about this. Nothing bad ever happened to a science team that went to Antarctica in a science fiction story!*

    *Would You Like to Know More?

    Why in Satan’s glorious name haven’t the studios let this man make his At the Mountains of Madness movie? Do you schmucks not realize that that would be a money-making machine?

    Guess it’s true what John Cleese says: “Ninety percent of people in their chosen field have no clue what the fuck they’re doing.”

  • Laser Books Review 13

    Laser Books Review 13

    13. Blake’s Progress by R.F. Nelson

    The Story So Far…

    With 1/5th of the Laser Books behind us, let’s pause for a moment, cast our minds back and look at the 12 (13, really) titles we’ve enjoyed/endured since late December, 2025. Yes, ladies and germs, today we’re doing a brief clip show.

    Hey, if Star Trek: The Next Generation could get away with that by the end of Season 2, so can I!

    No tears, please. It’s a waste of good suffering.

    Clive Barker, The Hellbound Heart

    Don’t worry, this won’t be an exhaustive list. I just want to quickly go over which of these twelve books I recommend, which ones I tentatively recommend, which ones I don’t, and which books should be killed with fire.

    Ready? Let’s go!

    Recommend

    Absolute bangers, every one. Caravan barely squeaks in; there’s just enough nuance in there to make it stand with the rest.

    Tentatively Recommend

    Seeds is an odd duck: two clever ideas Frankensteined together, both weaker together than they could’ve been apart.

    Seeklight is well written, but nothing we haven’t seen countless times from the masters of the Golden Age.

    Don’t Recommend

    No point in reading these stories. They don’t have much to offer.

    Kill it with Fire

    These titles espouse harmful rhetoric and ideologies which, in the past, have been used to curtail freedoms and enable tyranny.

    Surprisingly, there were far more easy recommends than I was expecting, and far fewer works that made me want to go full Fireman on them. And even the middle-of-the-road titles had some redeeming qualities.

    And so, a new chapter in these reviews commences, with today’s title…

    R.F. Nelson was a name unknown to me at the time I picked up this book. I refrain from looking Laser Books authors up until after I finish their first novel in the series, to go in with a blank slate as it were.

    So you can imagine my astonishment after finishing Blake’s Progress when I discovered that Nelson not only came back to this series with 32. Then Beggars Could Ride and 53. The Ecolog, he was also a contributing author to Harlan Ellison‘s seminal anthology Again, Dangerous Visions, and–

    I shit you not.

    –the inventor of the propeller beanie.

    I could not make this up!

    This is one of the principal joys of writing these reviews: discovering the lives of the authors and the things they made.

    I hope Ray gets remembered for his fiction, but even he admitted this wee cap is probably what’ll get his name into the history books.

    It’s little things like this that make life worth living: sunshine, hot coffee, and finding out a science fiction writer created a hat for nerds.

    Delightful.

    I’d love to tell you whether Ray can write the way he builds his headgear, but let’s touch base with Kelly Freas first.

    Cover

    13. Blake’s Progress by R.F. Nelson

    … wait a tit.

    Floating city… hawkman casting lightning… crumbling towers… rivers of blood… grim man picture-in-picture…

    Oh my God…

    … is this a Dark Souls Twitch stream?? I’m not hallucinating, right? You guys are seeing this too? Oh, man. Well, at least he’s not fighting the Fume Knight. Otherwise Blake would be making a very different face.

    Would You Like to Know More?

    What makes Fume Knight one of the most challenging bosses in the game is his large move-set and difficult tells to his attack animations and patterns.

    DKS2 Wiki

    The rage this fucker has induced in players from here to Japan is legendary, and many’s the gamer who has rage quit rather than face him again. Somewhere in the basement of a house in Scarborough, there’s a hole made by my brother’s fist which has been plastered over. It was made the first time he battled the Fume Knight.

    As far as Freas’s covers go, this one feels… off. Not bad–far from it!–but there’s definitely something jarring about the realistic sketch of Blake’s face, haloed in white, placed against the surreal image of an angel mopping the floor with some unfortunate people. It really puts you on the back foot and makes you feel uncomfortable.

    As always, that’s deliberate on Freas’s part. Blake’s Progress is a story of alienation from all familiar times and places, and Freas gets you started early on that. This is the kind of thing you could blow up on the walls of the Sistine Chapel and it would somehow work.

    Let’s see how Marketing Guy is doing.

    Blurb

    William Blake lived as no man had ever lived before. Sweeping across the centuries, he clashed with Cleopatra, chatted with Churchill, entertained with Ezekiel. His wife Kate was astounded at the man she had married. And she knew what she had to do! In this amazing account of Blake’s life, Ray Nelson tells it like it might have been, had Blake had his way. “There are wonders galore in this book… I don’t believe I’ve read a science fiction novel like Blake’s Progress before.” –Terry Carr

    Hmm, okay, Churchill and Cleopatra. Very promising. And while I’m not fond of wasting blurb space on quotes from other people, Terry Carr‘s words are at least short and to the point.

    Honestly… I’d be intrigued. I love people going on exciting journeys across spacetime, sweeping up their loved ones in the act–for good or ill.

    But can the story deliver?

    Story

    So first of all, Catherine Boucher and William Blake were real people.

    Blake (1757-1827) was a poet, painter, and printmaker who was largely unappreciated in his time. His Prophetic Books were dismissed in his time as being religiously problematic, but have since been reevaluated as unique, esoteric works of art. The more I read about him, the more William Blake feels like a character in an H.P. Lovecraft story: a man charting a hidden mythology and being dismissed by the rationalists of the world as a madman.

    I can’t speak to the quality or importance of Blake’s art. I’m already undertaking a forlorn odyssey in reviewing a series of 1975 Golden Age of Science Fiction revival novels; I’ve neither the time nor the inclination to add a foray into a late 18th century poet’s iconoclastic fantasyland, magical though it would no doubt be. But even a cursory reading of Blake’s biography reveals just how closely Ray Nelson cleaved to the source material.

    Even Kelly Freas took note:

    Look familiar?

    Catherine Boucher was the last child of market gardener William Boucher and his wife, Mary Davis. Though illiterate, Catherine demonstrated an inclination to art, and is credited as being the pillar which held William Blake aloft throughout his entire career. Blake took work as an engraver for printing houses in order to pay the bills, but frequently let that work fall by the wayside in favour of his own artistic pursuits. So, it fell to Catherine to pick up the slack and do the work so they could make rent.

    Would You Like to Know More?

    Okay, seriously, is there a Deadbeat Dead Poets Society that got created around the turn of the century?

    People romanticize the Romantics, but in order to have the time to write their best work, these guys put the burden of supporting them entirely on their families, avoided work like the plague, and gaslit their spouses into believing that “free love” (read “infidelity”) was the way God intended things to be.

    I’m so glad the conversation around these men finally started turning around. From a feminist perspective, you can point to any one of their works and say, “there is a deep, emotional cost attached to this poem’s creation–a cost that was paid by a woman.”

    Neither Golden Age of Sci-Fi novels nor period dramas set in the 18th century typically position a woman as the protagonist, so you can imagine my delight and surprise when I learned that Kate Boucher is the protagonist of the story!

    The tale begins with the Four Zoas (beings from Blake’s mythology). They travel to and fro across time, observing, but never interfering, until one day, Urizen wonders why don’t they interfere? Why don’t they make the world into what they please? The other Zoas don’t like this idea, but they are too late to stop Urizen from vanishing into the timestream.

    Fast forward (or backward?) a few thousand years, and Kate Boucher has butterflies about her imminent marriage to William Blake. They’ve had a brief courtship, but have decided they are right for one another. She signs the wedding certificate, they’re wedded, but never bedded–Blake has some hangups about sex. That’s okay. They’re happy.

    For now…

    Kate notices some odd behaviour on William’s part. He speaks with people late into the night, walks through a door of the house and comes back in a split second looking wild-eyed and disheveled. His work takes on a strange, esoteric tone. Finally, Kate begs to be let in on the mystery.

    William reveals that, since he was a child, he’s been visited by a being called Urizen, who looks like an angel, but isn’t one. Urizen has plans to build a new world by rewriting the past, and they want Kate along for the ride.

    But when Kate finds out they intend to do this by killing people at different stages of history, she’s mortified.

    Would You Like to Know More?

    In a true Golden Age story, Kate would be cast as the unreasonable female who can’t see the necessity of the male characters’ actions. Nelson flips this so that she is the sole voice of reason in Blake and Urizen’s insane world. Hers is the only conscience in sight, in this timeline or any other.

    In fact, Nelson consistently does a good job of putting the reader in the mind of a woman who is not only struggling to make her way in her own time, but trying to stop a strutting egoist as he attempts to erase everything she knows.

    Having been taught how to step out of spacetime by Blake, Kate takes on the mantle of the preserver of history. Much like in Serving in Time, we have two factions battling for their own perfect version of history, with all of humanity and William Blake caught in the middle.

    Social Commentary in Blake’s Progress

    There’s a tendency in a lot of time travel fiction to position organized religion (usually Christianity) as a destructive force in human affairs. In the novel, Urizen seeks to correct this by allowing a kind of animism–the worship of the sun–which espouses peace and cooperation.

    But inevitably, the same thing happens as happened with Christianity: systems of power became entrenched and perverted a message of peace into a licence to exterminate all those who are different.

    Urizen’s fundamental misunderstanding about humanity is that he can change the circumstances of our development all he likes, but the end of the day, we will still be human, and still flawed. Kate sees the detritus of his efforts all across the various histories that are born and unborn.

    The Triumph of Woman

    Ultimately, Kate realizes that she and her husband–now firmly back on her side–cannot defeat Urizen in a head-on confrontation, so her only hope is to outwit him. And she does so by discovering depths of power in the Zoas’ time manipulation techniques that not even they suspected. There’s a thrilling scene where Kate realizes she can multiply herself by backstepping one second at a time, creating a tsunami of Catherine Bouchers that wage war on Urizen across the timestream. It’s hilarious and invigourating seeing a tidal wave of 18th century urban housewives fighting an army of evil angels on the deck of Cleopatra’s galley.

    Ultimately Kate defeats Urizen by stepping outside not just her timeline, but all timelines, and is able to destroy all versions of Urizen at once before they embark on their crusade to alter history. I absolutely love that Kate wins by taking the high ground, metaphorically, metaphysically, and literally. It’s a terrific conclusion to a surreal dreamscape of a book.

    Conclusions and Recommendations

    Blake’s Progress is the strangest, most outlandish story yet featured in the Laser Books. It takes a pair of historical figures and sends them on a journey that mirrors the works of William Blake. You don’t need to know anything about Blake or Catherine to enjoy it. It’s a strong start to the next dozen Laser Books.

    What’s weird to me is that… I’ve actually read lots of stories like this in the canon of science fiction, but the way Nelson flips the narrative by placing a woman at the centre and challenging a lot of the assumptions both of his chosen time period and genre makes this a very magical unicorn of a novel.

    Catherine is an incredibly grounded protagonist: she definitely feels like an 18th century housewife in that she wants a safe, stable life with her partner, but she’s not spineless. Far from it: she goes to superhuman lengths to save the world thousands of times over, shows ingenuity to rival the gods, and withstands more emotional shocks than any person in her situation could be asked to endure. She’s a bundle of contradictions and convictions and you just can’t help rooting for her.

    My Goodreads Review

    A book whose title should probably be “Blake’s Acid Trip”, this novel takes the cliches of the Golden Age and flips them upside down, placing a woman in the driver’s seat of the narrative and taking you on a whirlwind tour of history, the afterlife, and one troubled poet’s weird view of creation. This novel has to be read to be believed.

    This was a great palate cleanser after the bullshit that was The King of Eolim. I’m suddenly feeling a lot better about life.

    Now… who’ve we got on deck?

    Who’s Next?

    Eyy, speaking of putting a woman in the driver’s seat, we’ve got our next entry of the Laser Books written by a woman! Kathleen Sky coming in hot with #14: Birthright.

    Blurb it, Sam.

    In this towering adventure, Kathleen Sky has created an unforgettable character. Is Andros human or an android created by his scientist-father? Others besides Andros would like to know. The survival of an entire android civilization hangs in the balance. In his desperate search for the truth about himself, Andros discovers what terror means. But neither terror nor love will stop him from finding the answer. He must claim his Birthright.
    Kathleen Sky is a storyteller of the first rank

    Until next time!

  • Laser Books Review 12

    Laser Books Review 12

    12. The King of Eolim by Raymond F. Jones

    *sigh* I was having such a good fortnight.

    First, my publisher told me they liked my first round of revisions on Seekers of the Fallen Stars, were adding the novel to their editorial pipeline, and wanted a proposal for Book 2 pronto. Sent that over, and they said it was strong, and told me to get writing.

    Then Escape Pod emailed me saying they wanted to add my breakout novelette “EDIE” to their reprint catalogue and podcast it.

    Then I watched Project Hail Mary, and knew right away that it was going down as a sci-fi classic alongside 2001, Contact, and Interstellar.

    And then, just when life couldn’t get any more awesome, four astronauts–including a Canadian–launched to the moon for the first time since Apollo 17 in 1972.

    A great wave of optimism has swept the world as Reid Wiseman, Victor Glover, Christina Koch, and Jeremy Hansen took us with them, further than any humans have ever gone before. I have been living a dream.

    And then I remembered…

    … I have to review The King of Eolim.

    Raymond F. Jones, author of Book 1: Renegades of Time, returns for a second outing. And oh-my-various-gods, it is painful.

    I suppose, much like the crew of Artemis II, sooner or later, we all gotta come back down to Earth.

    Cover

    If there’s a slide scale for Kelly Freas‘s work, it would look something like this:

    Bad —— Workmanlike —— Excellent

    Eolim’s cover falls somewhere between Workmanlike and Excellent, closer to the former than the latter. I really like what Kelly is doing with light and colour, but I think he overdid it a touch on the sparkle. And I’m not sure why there’s two spaceships; the Bradwell family takes two trips through space, sure, but on the same ship. Pictured in the portrait is Freeman, the protagonist (and no, you can’t convince me his father is the main character) and his crown, which we’ll talk about later.

    Oh, we will talk about it.

    Overall, the composition and blend of colours is good, but the sparkliness is just a little too much. I think he could’ve toned down the lighting.

    Enjoy this positive feedback, good people. It’s all downhill from here.

    Blurb

    Adventure stories don’t normally make a point as well, but Raymond F. Jones is no ordinary adventure story writer. In this touching and beautiful tale, Forester Bradwell shares his son’s adventures and learns a lesson he will never forget. Neither will you. For Forester Bradwell is one of the elite in a time and society where stupidity and ignorance have been conquered by genetic engineering. But his son Freeman is a Retard. The King of Eolim is the story of the Bradwell’s search for a home that will truly be “home” for Free.

    If you read that and threw up a bit in your mouth, I wouldn’t blame you. I had the same reaction, and I’ll tell you why.

    Elementary school was the most excruciating experience of my life. I had good teachers and made some friends, but I was always the slowest kid at sports and scholastics, to the point where I was given a Special Accommodations rating to help me keep pace with my classmates in learning.

    In the Ontario school system, this means I was often separated from the rest of my class and put in a small group of students with similar learning or concentration challenges so that I could be taught in a quieter environment where teachers could spend more time addressing my needs. These sessions actually nurtured my desire to be a writer, because I had the time to express my desires to my teachers who in turn gave me the time and space to pursue them.

    But what bothered me for all those years is that I knew I learned differently from other kids, but I was still chained to the school system. Some of my fondest memories are of going to the school library, picking up a book, and reading. I could read whole books in one sitting, and if it was an educational or non-fiction book, I could frequently recall every single thing I read in that book for weeks afterward.

    And yet, if you put me in a classroom and tried to teach me math, religion, or science, my eyes would glaze over and my mind would shut down.

    And yes, I had the R-word thrown at me a few times. That is not something you forget.

    Reading the cover blurb for this novel, I knew exactly what kind of story I was in for. I hoped I was wrong.

    I wasn’t.

    Story

    This just in: Neurodivergent Youth Taken from his Abusive Family and Placed in Foster Care with Telepathic Aliens

    In a eugenics-based future, undesirable traits have been edited out of human beings, but occasionally, children like Freeman Bradwell are born who, while completely ordinary by today’s standards, with healthy imaginations and empathetic minds, are considered R—— by the standards of a society where exceptionalism is ordinary and cold calculation is prized.

    In school, Freeman’s “disability” is recognized by his students and teachers and he is crowned “King of Eolim”, in a perverse tradition that follows the wearing of a dunce cap.

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    The dunce cap is a tradition stemming from the 19th and 20th centuries. Children at school who were considered slow or disruptive were brought to the front of the class and forced to wear a pointed cap with a D or DUNCE printed on it. Modern psychologists agree that these “problem children” were likely kids with ADHD or who would’ve benefitted from special learning accommodations, or even who simply didn’t gel well with the school system.

    Kids like me, in other words.

    While a normal practice, there were many who, even at the time, called it debasing and harsh . I cannot imagine the psychological damage that was done to children with brains like mine because of it.

    The saddest thing is, Freeman knows he is being made fun of, but he tries to wear the crown with pride as a way of undercutting his abusers. He demonstrates a remarkable strength of will considering his young age and his lack of allies in this cruel society.

    His worst abusers are his parents. His mother won’t show him an ounce of love, and his father Forester wants to take his family away from Earth so he won’t have to listen to his colleagues demean him for having a R—– son. So they fly away in a spacecraft and crash-land on an alien world, Iduna-style.

    Throughout the novel, Forester belittles Freeman, disregards his ideas, and even when Freeman calls the attention of an alien tribe to assist his family after their crash landing, Forester takes it upon himself to assume the role of colonizer and indoctrinate the aliens into human ways of thinking.

    Oh yeah, and he frequently equates the aliens to Freeman because of their wide-eyed, dim-witted innocence, and denigrates them for sacrificing many of their number to stop Forester from taking Freeman away from them–Freeman, at this point, having become their friend.

    Forester and his wife, seeing that Freeman is happier on this alien world they’ve come to, leave him there and go back to Earth. At the end, Forester and his wife come to love Freeman, but they still think it’s for the best to leave him behind.

    Conclusions and Recommendations

    I’m sorry, guys, I have to wrap this up. I would’ve gone into more detail of the plot, but this book is too painful for me to talk about any longer.

    There have been many well-intentioned attempts by sci-fi authors over the years to address issues such as race, sex, and neurodivergence, but lacking in modern resources and studies, such attempts were inevitably clumsy, and often harmful. The King of Eolim is one such attempt.

    My Goodreads Review:

    Raymond F. Jones is a veteran of the genre. He was a regular contributor to Astounding (Analog) and Galaxy. His last outing in the Laser Books, Renegades of Time, had some good scenes in it. But King of Eolim, however well-intentioned, is a deeply harmful book, and in the world of modern science fiction and neurodivergent studies, it has no place.

    I can’t be too harsh on Jones, I’ve written some well-intentioned but deeply harmful stories myself, but I also had the benefit of living in a wiser society, with gentle, educated friends, who showed me where I mis-stepped and where I could do better. Maybe Jones could do better if he were alive today, maybe not.

    But let this stand as a cautionary tale to writers everywhere, including myself: educate yourself before you write, lest your pen draw blood.

    And with that… we’re one-fifth done the Laser Books. The King of Eolim marks the end of the initial run of 12 novels. Let’s see where Roger Elwood takes us next.

    Who’s Next?

    Lucky 13 is Blake’s Progress by R.F. Nelson. Blurb it, baby!

    William Blake lived as no man had ever lived before. Sweeping across the centuries, he clashed with Cleopatra, chatted with Churchill, entertained with Ezekiel. His wife Kate was astounded at the man she had married. And she knew what she had to do! In this amazing account of Blake’s life, Ray Nelson tells it like it might have been, had Blake had his way. “There are wonders galore in this book… I don’t believe I’ve read a science fiction novel like Blake’s Progress before.”–Terry Carr

    Well, you know, one mention of ole’ Winston C. and I’m on board. I’ll see you all then!

    Addendum: Artemis II

    As I write these words, the Orion spacecraft Integrity is falling back down Earth’s gravity well, on target for a splashdown April 10th at 7 o’clock. Godspeed, Artemis II. The whole world is wishing you four a safe and uneventful return.

  • Laser Books Review 11

    Laser Books Review 11

    11. Unto the Last Generation by Juanita Coulson

    Last review, I made a crack about women writing sci-fi, and got a crack on the head for my political incorrectness. To anyone who might’ve been offended: I apologize. I don’t know how I’ll ever forgive myself. I’ve already booked myself into rehab.

    And next week I’ll be on the Jordan Peterson Podcast.

    Okay, okay, I’m gonna cut the chauvinist humour now. In today’s review, we have to talk about extinction, cloning, and vaginas — subjects I take very seriously.

    Juanita Coulson’s first listed sci-fi credit is “Another Rib”, published in The Magazine of Fantasy and Science Fiction, co-authored with Marion Zimmer Bradley in 1963 under the pen name John J. Wells. In 1965, after being nominated seven consecutive years, she, along with her husband Robert, won the Hugo Award for Best Fanzine for editing Yandro.

    Would You Like to Know More?

    If the name Robert Coulson sounds familiar, that’s because he co-authored Laser Book 4, Gates of the Universe, with Gene DeWeese. Check out my very short review of that forgettable tale here.

    She is also a Filk Hall of Famer. Her list of works on ISFDB shows a healthy blend of original fiction, essays, art, and reviews — and that’s before you get into her history with filk songs and poetry. To my delight, she also wrote a Star Trek: TOS tie-in story as part of the collection Star Trek: The New Voyages.

    I’m always excited to read works by authors who flex their muscles not only across many different kinds of writing, but also different kinds of art. Generally, this is indicative of a robust intellect and a linguistic ingenuity not often found in those who confine themselves to one field. An excellent example would be Clive Barker: a man whose paintings are as widely appreciated as his prose. He paints with words, and tells stories with paint.

    And speaking of art…

    Cover

    Whoa, what a stark departure from the previous covers! I can tell Kelly Freas got tired of being told to colour inside the lines, so he made his own lines.

    Having read the book, I can tell you this cover is representative of the story within, but not in the way you’d think. There’s a lot of travelling through abandoned cityscapes and desolate imagery in the story, but Freas chose not to depict any of that. So, what did he leave us with?

    The first place the eye goes when looking at the cover is the huge red cloning vat on the right. The ghostly forms of unborn children float within. It’s a haunting image, and it takes effort to tear the eye away from it.

    The bright yellow and orange lights of the leftmost panel draw the eye next. At first, I had no idea what he was saying with these geometric shapes and flashing lights, but now I realize he’s evoking the image of a computer — the bulky kind with flashing lights that was a staple of sci-fi storytelling from 1950 to 1970.

    Next the eye travels to the little girl on the bottom left, Ria. She’s got a forlorn expression on her face, but a hard set to her lips and shoulders. She looks tougher than her size suggests. And her gaze naturally directs us to the portrait of our protagonist, Richard Parnell on the right, looking a little drawn and haggard.

    It’s only writing this review that I realize what Freas was going for:

    • Cloning
    • Computers
    • Ria
    • Parnell

    These are the people and technologies that the world is banking on to provide hope to a fading humanity. Rather than showing dark and depressing images of empty cities and rioting crowds, Freas showed us the tip of the spear, the vanguard, the forces trying to save Homo sapiens from extinction.

    That would be striking enough, but the way he arrays his elements with unexpected geometric precision, leading the eye in a spiral down to our protagonist and all that concerns him, is such a stark departure from what I’ve grown used to seeing from him.

    I hope to see more covers like this in the future.

    Blurb

    Population Zero has accomplished its mission only too well. Not only has the world’s population ceased to mushroom, it has ceased to reproduce…because it cannot. Wholesale application of population control technology has rendered man infertile. In the Life Sciences Building, a team of doctors and scientists is trying everything imaginable in their frantic efforts to produce life artificially…when into their midst walks a little girl. “I’m eight,” the girl announces proudly. But mankind has been sterile for more than 15 years!

    I mentioned last review that this reminded me of The Children of Men. I’d never read the book, but I’ve seen the Alfonso Cuarón film, and the notion of a young woman suddenly turning up who provides hope to a dying humanity definitely has echoes with this blurb.

    Marketing Guy did pretty good here! I’d certainly be intrigued. It’s dark with a bright ray of sunshine cutting the gloom. Nicely done, MG! Keep it up and we might not have to feed you to the hungry Targs.

    Now, while he’s busy quaking in his boots, lets move on to the main course.

    Story

    *cracks open the book, clears throat*

    The story begins… wait a minute…

    *squints*

    Now what are the odds of this!

    First Re: Reading with Caravan, now Bakka!

    You know what that means…

    Bakka-Phoenix Books

    It’s pluggin’ time!

    Bakka was a combined SFF book and comic shop on Queen Street in Toronto, opened in May of 1972 (one month after John Young, Ken Mattingly, and Charles Duke went to the moon on Apollo 16, funny enough). The comic portion of the shop split off and became Silver Snail, originally situated across the street from Bakka.

    In March 1998, Bakka “marched” over to Yonge Street, and in March 2005, it “marched” back to Queen. Then in November (sigh… they could’ve gone in March and got the hat trick) 2010, they… relocated… blech… to their current spot at Harbord and Spadina, and rebranded themselves Bakka-Phoenix Books.

    In the years since, they’ve become the de facto launch site for Toronto-based genre writers. P.A. Cornell is the most recent author I know who launched a book there (Shoeshine Boy and Cigarette Girl — check it out!), and I hope to have the Toronto launch of my own debut novel, Seekers of the Fallen Stars, at that store. They’re also frequent vendors at Can*Con. I’ve given them an absurd amount of money over the years, and doubtless I’ll be giving them even more in the future. It’s worth every cent. They are the flagship of Toronto’s SFF scene and I’m happy to support them.

    I look forward to the day when my book is on their shelves.

    Digression Over

    Okay, now that that’s out of the way, let’s get back to the story.

    Unto the Last Generation presents us with a future with echoes of Stephen Goldin’s Caravan, but rather than too many people being the direct cause of societal collapse, it is too few.

    The reason for this is actually quite intriguing. Prior to the events of the book, women across the planet developed an immune response to male sperm, killing sperm cells as they would a virus or bacteria. The result is that no sperm are able to reach an egg and so women cannot have children.

    Would You Like to Know More?
    Human ovum

    Holy shit, Juanita. I don’t know if you realize just how smart and prescient your plot device is, but you deserve the gold-pressed latinum star of sci-fi worldbuilding.

    Let me mansplain for a minute.

    I’m not sure what the state of immmunology was at the time Last Generation was written, but it’s well-known now just how hostile and uninviting the female vagina is.

    Microbiotically-speaking, of course.

    The vagina has a high pH level, is coated with antimicrobial mucus, and is armed to the metaphorical teeth with every kind of immune cell available to the human body.

    (Geez, this got Freudian fast…)

    It shouldn’t be a surprise: being an orifice into the body’s interior, there has to be a great deal of security to prevent unwanted intrusion.

    But that security also attacks sperm cells — the very cells needed for reproduction. The reason why is probably evolutionary: you don’t want any Tom, Dick, or Harry fertilizing your eggs, so the vagina’s defences whittle down the sperm count until only the toughest remain. From there, it’s a race to the ovaries.

    But this world of immune-meets-reproductive systems gets even more interesting.

    We’ve known for some time now that as much as 8% of the human genome comes from viruses — specifically ancient viruses who smuggled genetic sequences into our ancestors which never got eliminated, probably because it imparted an advantage of some kind.

    But there’s a theory gaining traction in recent years that says we may owe our entire existence to viruses. How, you ask? It’s simple.

    Sperm.

    What is a sperm cell, really? It’s a vessel carrying a genetic payload which infiltrates a larger cell (ovum) and reprograms it. This is the exact behaviour a virus uses to reproduce.

    The modern theory is that our ancient ancestors learned this trick during a viral infection and incorporated it into the reproductive process. And since anti-sperm antibodies are already a well-documented cause of infertility in some couples, it’s no stretch to believe that a slight change in genetics (particularly in a developed country, where autoimmune diseases are more common) could lead to sex-wide infertility.

    If you’d like to know where I learned all this, read Philipp Dettmer‘s book Immune. You will come to know not only your immune system, but your whole life, a lot better.

    Researcher Richard Parnell and his wife Therese, who’ve long dreamed of having a baby, have been working feverishly as part of a cross-country team of scientists to solve the fertility issue before humankind goes extinct. So far, cloning has seemed like the best option, and some scientists like Jesse Bliss are going all-in on the technology. Into their midst walks an eight year old girl, Ria, a street orphan being cared for by a group of elderly folk hiding out in the local library.

    Eight years old… except women have been infertile for fifteen years.

    Suddenly the Life Sciences team realizes that not all women are infertile. Someone out there is able to have children. Cloning may not be the only option.

    As a riot inches closer to the Life Sciences Building, Richard and Therese make the decision to move Ria to the project’s headquarters, there to begin a nationwide search for her parents and any other children. This involves a perilous journey across a collapsing America.

    Detloff, Bliss, and Preconceptions

    One of the most interesting characters in the story is Nevin Detloff, a populist radical. Food is scarce in this world, and the government maintains strict control of it. Detloff works hard to redistribute calories equally.

    Reading this book, I assumed early on — as many readers doubtless would — that Detloff would be the villain, a wolf in sheep’s clothing, a ringleader of the masses who would use charisma to get whatever he wants. I was surprised, then, when by happenstance he fell in with our hero’s convoy and turned out to be a decent guy.

    Is he opportunistic? Yeah. Always hunting for a political angle? Sure. But it’s always in service of his movement to feed people and building grassroots connections. He is that legendary political unicorn: a moral demagogue.

    If anything, it’s Detloff’s more zealous followers that pose the most danger; people who have taken his message to mean that they should take whatever they want by force of arms, even from innocent people. That’s not what Detloff believes. He always punches up, never down. He challenges authority and fights for the common folk.

    As I mentioned in my Crash Landing on Iduna review, most grassroots movements start out innocently like this. Then some assholes take over and it becomes something sinister.

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    One example that hits close to home is incel culture.

    I want you to sit back and think for a minute. Where do you think the term incel came from? When I tell you the answer, you probably won’t believe it.

    The term incel was originally coined by a Canadian university student named Alana. In 1997, she created an online forum called “Alana’s Involuntary Celibacy Project” wherein she discussed, and invited discussion, on sexual inexperience as it pertained to societal expectations. Initially, it was a positive conversation, and Alana departed believing it would continue thus in her absence.

    But over the next twenty years, the term was taken and perverted by men who used it to blame women for why they failed at relationships. The movement metastasized and became a hub of misogynism — the total opposite of what Alana sought to foster.

    After the Yonge Street Van Attack, she was shocked to discover what her conversation had turned into.

    But do you know which character actually turns out to be an asshole? Jesse Bliss.

    Bliss is the man in charge of the cloning efforts, working closely with a woman named Ines to create a test tube baby. They use one of his sperm and Ines’s ovum to make the child. When Bliss reveals the success to the Parnells, it is treated as a miraculous moment of hope.

    And then Bliss, in front of Ines, casually suggests they dissect the child to make sure it developed properly.

    Ines very nearly claws Bliss’s eyes out for that, and it’s only by revealing their success to the rest of the team that she stops Bliss from going ahead with the dissection.

    Normally in Golden Age Sci-fi novels, the demagogue is the bad guy and the scientist is the good guy. But Juanita Coulson, New Wave authoress that she is, flips it, and throws in a good helping of maternity rights in the bargain. And it’s brilliant.

    Two Hopes for Humanity

    “Send in the clones!”

    — Danilo Odell, Star Trek: The Next Generation, Episode 218, “Up the Long Ladder”

    Shortly after the cloning process is revealed to be working, dozens of other children are found and brought to the Life Sciences headquarters along with their parents, to keep them all safe. Nevin Detloff plays a critical role, here: he uses his network of followers to find the children and their families. His national reach proves essential to Life Sciences’ work.

    Richard Parnell realizes that even with these children, they’ll still need the cloning process; there aren’t enough natural-born kids alive to rebuild the human race in their own time. And what if the mutation that created the infertility problem spreads to the healthy kids eventually?

    Better keep the Kaminoans on speed dial.

    And how will clones be viewed in the future? Will they be seen as second-class citizens, less human than natural born children? How will legislature integrate cloning practices?

    So many questions, so few answers, but the novel ends on a cautiously optimistic note: whatever vicissitudes and pitfalls await us, we’ve proven we’re smart enough not to go extinct. Rich and Therese now have the hope of having their own child someday — a cloned child, perhaps, but a child of their genes nonetheless. Coulson nails the final notes of the book with expert precision.

    Conclusions and Recommendations

    You can feel Juanita Coulson struggling against the constraints of the Laser Books in writing this tale. She clearly wants to go further, get meaner, but Harlequin has her on a leash, as they do all the other authors in this series. But she easily ranks among those authors who succeeded despite their constraints, and every page of this book crackles with expectation and tension.

    If this book were written today, without those constraints, it would be very different — and much more brutal.

    Consider this: what would the world’s reaction be if it discovered the human race was about to go extinct, and the female body was empirically proven to be the cause?

    Violence against women would explode in ways the human race has never seen.

    It nauseates me to even contemplate saying this… but I wish that had been examined in this story, because it would absolutely be a pandemic in the future Coulson depicts. Misogyny and femicide are on the rise now, but a fertility crisis involving only the female sex would cause crimes against women to reach the stratosphere.

    I wonder if Coulson would’ve made that a part of her book if she’d been given free reign. I don’t think you could tell this story today without acknowledging it in some way.

    I do not, by any means, advocate for graphic descriptions of violence against women — you can turn on the daily news and glut yourself on that horror any time, which is itself a tragedy — but pretending the crisis doesn’t exist, or would not worsen in Coulson’s invented future, is naive at best, and dishonest at worst.

    But even as it stands, Coulson still manages to integrate women’s rights into the novel at the very end with the showdown between Ines and Bliss, and considering how much else she accomplishes, I’m more than happy with the end product.

    My Goodreads Review

    A tight, powerful, scientifically-informed tale of a fertility crisis in the near future, Unto the Last Generation marks the first story told by a woman in the Laser Books lineup, and it sets a high bar for those that follow. Crackling with tension, sprinkled with poignant commentary, this is a very powerful tale of hope in a hopeless future. Easy recommend if you can find a copy!

    With that, I close out our review of the first female Laser Book entry. I’m eagerly looking forward to our next authoress, Kathleen Sky, and her novel Birthright. We don’t have long to wait; she’s #14 in the series!

    But for the nonce, let’s see who #12 is.

    Who’s Next?

    Damn, that’s sparkly! Let’s see what the blurb says.

    Adventure stories don’t normally make a point as well, but Raymond F. Jones is no ordinary adventure story writer. In this touching and beautiful tale, Forester Bradwell shares his son’s adventures and learns a lesson he will never forget. Neither will you. For Forester Bradwell is one of the elite in a time and society where stupidity and ignorance have been conquered by genetic engineering. But his son Freeman is a Retard. The King of Eolim is the story of the Bradwell’s search for a home that will truly be “home” for Free.

    Fuck.

  • Laser Books Review 10

    Laser Books Review 10

    10. Falling Toward Forever by Gordon Eklund

    *Screeeech!*

    Whew! I made it just in time! I couldn’t possibly miss this week’s review of Gordon Eklund’s second entry in the Laser Books! That’s right, lads and lasses, he’s back with another romp across the spacetime continuum with Falling Toward Forever.

    It’s hard to believe it’s only been a month since I reviewed Serving in Time. Time does indeed fly. And that review was a beast at 4100 words. It couldn’t be helped; I had a lot to say. Eklund had served up a truly original time travel tale with lots of ethical and social questions.

    This seems as good a time as any to remind ourselves what the staples of Eklund’s writing style are before proceeding into the new title:

    • Clean prose with occasional nuanced passages
    • Deep, philosophical queries revealed through character discourse
    • Conversational dialogue with occasional poetic flourishes
    • Twists on well-worn tropes

    Books stick in your mind for different reasons: maybe they had some really gross scenes, maybe you saw yourself reflected in the characters, or maybe — as with Serving in Time — they left you with thought-provoking questions about the society you live in.

    Here’s hoping that Falling Toward Forever gives us at least as much to chew on after the final page!

    But of course, we have to take a moment and see what Kelly Freas has for us on the cover.

    Cover

    My first thought was that this is a little too much like Walls Within Walls (bland, lacking detail), but nothing could be further from the truth. Freas takes his mastery of lighting and texture (and the combination thereof) to a whole new level in this cover.

    The sun in particular caught my eye. The fluidic texture of its surface reminds me of the simple shaders I learned to create in Unity, and which I saw a great deal of in the early space-based video games I used to play as a kid. Freas also layered flames around it — orange over bronze — to create a magnificent, hot corona.

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    Dick’s Solar Cookbook: Serve your own sun in twenty minutes or less.

    Ingredients:

    • Sphere (any size)
    • Shader
    • Point light (substitute directional light for fixed perspective games)

    Instructions:

    • Create a sphere in your game engine. Most engines have the option to create simple geometric shapes.
    • Create a shader graph. Ideally, you want a watery, rippling surface texture. Noise can be increased to simulate sunspot activity
    • Apply the finished shader to the sphere
    • Create a point light and attach it to the sphere (if you find the sun doesn’t “glow” much, you can try placing an additional light in front of the sun to illuminate its surface)

    The cover is not so monochrome as it first appears: the dome and towers in the background inject a little teal and green into the image, and everything is contrasted nicely by the large purple lettering of the title. Again, Freas shows how a title can be a key ingredient in the composition of a cover.

    The hunched, shadowy figures impart a sense of unease; are they human? Once human? Alien? Who knows? The unease is only enhanced by Calvin Waller’s tortured face, bound round the neck with a shimmering chain. This is not the kind of face you make when you’re having a good time.

    Or… maybe it is?

    Now, let’s see how Marketing Guy did with the blurb.

    Blurb

    As a mercenary soldier of fortune, Calvin Waller has grown used to danger. Danger is the air he breathes. But when he finds himself thrown from the midst of an African battle into a primitive farm community of the future, he is naturally disoriented. Trained as he is, he quickly gets his bearings and begins a new and different battle…only to be “thrown” again. He is being manipulated. Falling Toward Forever, is the story of his search for The Manipulator, and for himself. A strange and wonderful search…for The Manipulator holds all the strings.

    Ooh, a temporal whodunit? I like this! We haven’t actually had a soldier as a protagonist yet in this series, let alone a mercenary. And coming out as this book does in 1975, I’m intrigued at how Eklund will depict a soldier of fortune, given that they were responsible for some deplorable, detestable, dastardly deeds throughout the Cold War.

    Would You Like to Know More?

    If you’d like a deep dive into the structure, ethics, and history of a modern mercenary company, check out this excellent book by Jeremy Scahill.

    I first became aware of Scahill’s work through the documentary Dirty Wars, chronicling the War on Terror through the lens of special forces black ops.

    In Blackwater, he breaks down the history and operations of the eponymous mercenary corporation behind the Nisour Square massacre, known today as “Baghdad’s Bloody Sunday.”

    Curiously, Blackwater, Dirty Wars and Falling Toward Forever all cover the same subject matter: self-fulfilling prophecies.

    The blurb hints that this man, who’s fought only for coin most of his life, will begin to find a higher calling as he is dragged across the spacetime continuum. These kinds of stories are simple, but enjoyable: we all want to believe that a person who has lived a life of self-interest can redeem themselves by helping others, and reading this blurb, that’s the kind of story I’m anticipating.

    But of course, Eklund has proven himself deft at manipulating expectations and turning well-worn tropes on their heads, so lets see what he does with this!

    I’m getting gooseflesh just thinking about it.

    Story

    The face you make when you step on a Lego.

    Or when you finish this book.

    Ugh… Gordon… what happened?

    This isn’t a four-star book.

    This ain’t even a three-star book!

    How can the man who wrote Serving in Time turn around and write something as mediocre and pulpy as this?

    Actually, I take that back. Some really great work came out of the pulp magazines. This, though… I can’t fathom it.

    This is gonna be a short review, guys…

    Waller is serving in Africa (specific country unknown) fighting for a local insurgency. He decided long ago that he didn’t like governments and now fights for the underdogs. In the middle of a battle, Waller, his comrade Ahmad, and a civilian named Sondra are yoinked out of their native time and flung into the future.

    What follows is a pretty repetitive plot: the three of them fall in with a group of oppressed people indigenous to a particular time, they arm the indigenous group, teach them to fight their oppressors, and then are yoinked again. The cause of these jumps are unknown until the end of the book.

    In the far future, millions or perhaps billions of years hence, the human race split into two camps: those who embraced change and evolution, and those who clung to our Homo sapiens past (I’m not really clear on the nuances here — I think we’re supposed to infer that the latter is bad?).

    One of these “pure Homo sapiens“, Barone, had access to a time machine and wanted to know why the species appeared to split, with the majority of us leaving. He identified Waller, Ahmad, and Sondra as the cause, and sought to prevent the split and keep humanity pure by yoinking them out of their native time.

    Of course, us veterans of the genre can immediately see the idiot’s mistake: in trying to manipulate time to prevent the future he feared, he ended up ensuring it would come to be. Our three um… heroes? I guess? They’re like a thread across history, teaching various groups to embrace change and ultimately leave Earth behind.

    Would You Like to Know More?

    As I said before, this is painfully reminiscent of the War on Terror. Al Qaeda’s stated goal was to “end the American Century” with it’s 9/11 attacks. They started the job, but America finished it by becoming embroiled in endless conflict in the Middle East.

    A story which, unbelievably, is playing out again today.

    This is kind of a callback to Serving in Time, if you squint: a single action cannot change history, but several of them, compounded together, can completely divert its track.

    The story ends with Waller, Ahmad, and Sondra destroying Barone’s time machine. History is reset to the moment they were taken, but Waller remembers everything, and it is hinted at that Ahmad and Sondra do as well.

    And… yeah, that’s kind of it.

    Conclusions and Recommendations

    This is baffling to me.

    Gordon Eklund demonstrated such skill and invention when he wrote Serving in Time, and I’m still chewing over the ethical implications of that book two years on! But with Falling Toward Forever, he comes out with the most generic piece of Golden Age tripe you ever saw.

    I could make some suggestions about how to fix the plot, but… why bother? This kind of story — an unwilling hero being dragged through time — has been done to death. There are some choice Twilight Zone episodes you could watch that execute this premise with verve, sass, and ingenuity, and Rod Serling’s writing is really the pinnacle of play where sci-fi tropes are concerned.

    Really, Gordon, what happened? Did a loved one die just before you started writing this book? Do you owe money to somebody? I could at least cut you some slack if there was a good reason for this.

    But this is a bigger misstep than declaring war on a Middle Eastern country without a plan.

    “What a flop. What a fiasco!” — Cardinal Copia

    My Goodreads Review

    I can’t believe the man who wrote Serving in Time also wrote this book. Falling Toward Forever, much like its antagonist, is an uninventive, unintelligent, unenlightened throwback to the Golden Age of Sci-fi. Eklund demonstrates none of the creativity he exhibited with his first entry in the Laser Books, and consequently comes up with a plodding snorefest of a novel. The only reason I’m giving it two stars instead of one is because, unlike with the novels comprising the Trench of Sadness (Crash Landing on Iduna, Gates of the Universe, Walls Within Walls), there is nothing truly offensive about this tale and it is at least more memorable than Gates. But it is still a terrible disappointment.

    Geez, guys, I’m sorry. This is a bummer. I really had high hopes for this book. I feel like I need to make this up to you somehow. Maybe write about my love of Babylon 5 or something.

    Oh, actually, did you know I got my girlfriend L. hooked on that series recently? It’s my second time through, but her first. We just finished “Babylon Squared”, where Babylon 4 gets yoinked through spacetime much the same way Waller was.

    That’s a good example of unwilling time travel, but man that episode hurts my soul knowing where everything leads…

    Hey, why don’t you just watch that episode instead of reading Falling Toward Forever? At least it builds to something interesting!

    Who’s Next?

    Wait… what’s this?!

    A science fiction novel…

    … written by a woman?

    I had no idea such a thing existed! What a rare occurrence, like neutron stars colliding in deep space.

    *shouting* Hey! Hey, L.! You gotta see this, baby! It’s a science fiction novel written by a woman! I didn’t know they let women write these days!

    Wait… what’re you doing with that frying pan? Oh… oh no, it was just a joke, honey. A trifling bit of japery! Y’know, cuz the Golden Age was such an Old Boys Clu–

    *BONG*

    Ahem… You guys check out the blurb while I go look for some Tylenol…

    Population Zero has accomplished its mission only too well. Not only has the world’s population ceased to mushroom, it has ceased to reproduce…because it cannot. Wholesale application of population control technology has rendered man infertile. In the Life Sciences Building, a team of doctors and scientists is trying everything imaginable in their frantic efforts to produce life artificially…when into their midst walks a little girl. “I’m eight,” the girl announces proudly. But mankind has been sterile for more than 15 years!

    Looks like we’ve got a Children of Men scenario! See y’all then!

    *rubbing my head*

    Ouch…

  • Laser Books Review 9

    Laser Books Review 9

    9. Invasion by Aaron Wolfe (Dean Koontz)

    Stay tuned at the end of this review for an important public service announcement regarding the Laser Books upload schedule!

    Sorry, I had to.

    At 4:30p.m., June 19th, 1999, a man named Bryan Edwin Smith struck Stephen King with his van and put him in the hospital. While he was recuperating, he wrote the novel Dreamcatcher, which is a story of a small rural community that comes under threat from alien lifeforms during a terrible blizzard. Most of the action takes place in a cabin. Dreamcatcher came out in 2001.

    Would You Like to Know More?

    Despite being a hot mess of a book, I actually have very fond memories of it. I read it in late December of 2017 while my grandmother, Doreen Dick, lay dying in Michael Garron Hospital. I needed to get out of my house and be alone after visiting her, so I’d hike a kilometer through the snow to a Tim Hortons on Warden Avenue, order an iced capp, and read the book for a couple hours while the sun went down.

    Even then, I knew it was not the best of Stephen King’s work, but it was a much-needed, low engagement escape at a time when I desperately needed one, and for that, I’m happy to have picked up the book when I did.

    Mid-winter — especially a bitter cold Ontario mid-winter — is an excellent time to read Dreamcatcher. As the dark comes early and the temperature plunges below -20 Celsius, the oppressive atmosphere of the book is enhanced. Try to find a beat up paperback version from a used bookstore and read it by a solitary incandescent lamp in a place where the wind keens tauntingly.

    Suddenly everything which seems silly in the book becomes quite a bit scarier.

    Stephen King and Dean Koontz are often mentioned in the same breath because they both work in similar genres (horror and suspense), are both incredibly prolific, and, by any metric, enormously successful. I remember discovering King in my teens, as most young writers do, but it took a while for his style to click with me.

    I didn’t discover Koontz until I read Invasion, which he wrote under the nom de plume Aaron Wolfe, and something struck me harder than Smith’s truck struck King.

    Invasion is Dreamcatcher.

    Or rather Dreamcatcher as it should have been.

    It was written in 1975.

    And it is Dean Koontz’s first novel.

    I actually could not believe Invasion was a Laser Book by the time I finished it. The quality is so high it could’ve easily appeared as a serial in any science-fiction or horror magazine at the time, or been published as a standalone novel by Ace, Del Rey, or Tor.

    Invasion is the equivalent an in-field home run for the Laser Books: we’ve had a few singles (Seeds of Change, Caravan), a few strikeouts (Crash Landing on Iduna, Gates of the Universe), a proper home run or two (Serving in Time, Herds), but now we have a play that is unbelievably rare and awesome, and just when you think it’s gonna get shut down, Koontz pulls it home.

    There’s literally no part of this book that isn’t incredible, and it all starts with the cover.

    Cover

    This is Freas‘s best cover yet, hands down. Why? He tells the entire story.

    First thing you notice is the protagonist in the portrait, Don, staring in bug-eyed terror at the skull in the centre-left, behind Roger Elwood‘s name.

    From there the eye naturally travels up to the alien invaders on the left, which are sketched with such simplicity while still being faithful to their description in the novel. I don’t know how Freas managed to make their claws so detailed while being so tiny. The eye roves over theirs, glowing and yellow, then up to the shattered doors of the farmhouse, then up to the huge snowball-shaped spaceship hovering over everything.

    This is literally the path the story takes: first you see the aliens’ leavings, then their eyes, then the home they broke into, then their ship. Freas visually describes the story to you the way Don witnesses it.

    But perhaps my favourite element of the cover is that blood-red title looming over everything. We’ve never seen a title with these rigid lines in the Laser Books before, nor one such an alarming and pure shade of red. At first I thought it was a military stencil font, like the kind you see stamped onto the Ark of the Covenant at the end of Raiders of the Lost Ark, but upon closer inspection, I realize that’s not it.

    The letters are composed of simple geometric shapes. Stare at any one of them for long enough, and it almost ceases to be a letter at all, and just becomes an abstract symbol. Like when you say a word like “refrigerator” ten times in a row and it loses all meaning and becomes a weird collection of sounds.

    The craziest thing is… this is an actual metaphor for the book’s plot! Don sees all the individual signs of the alien invasion around Timberlake Farm, but doesn’t recognize them for what they are because he isn’t stepping back and seeing the wider picture.

    Perspective, sightlines, colour, title font, Freas went above and beyond the call of duty with Invasion’s cover. As my girlfriend L. would say, “I have no notes.”

    Blurb

    Barry Malzberg says that Invasion “is simply one of the most remarkable first novels in any field that I have ever read.” The English critic, Philip Pollock says that it is “quite genuinely spine-chilling, well-written… with a twist to the ending which I like very much…” (but we can’t reveal the ending). He goes on to say that “in any collection of SF there has to be one tale such as this, and I think it might probably be difficult to find another one of quite this calibre.” Difficult indeed! Invasion is nothing less than a superb novel.

    Okay, listen.

    I know I harped on about Seeklight‘s usage of critic reviews on the cover blurb, but the reality is, I don’t think the hype for that book was deserved. It was competently written, but it’s plot was done better in the years before and since.

    Invasion, though… I’m pissed off as hell it doesn’t have a proper blurb, because that would be so easy to write. It could even be one sentence:

    Isolated on a rented farm during a terrible blizzard, a man fights to protect his family against the alien creatures prowling in the snow outside.

    However, this one time, I’m giving it a pass, because every word of praise for Invasion is deserved.

    In short, I would not be very tempted to read this book based on the cover blurb, which is a crime on Marketing Guy’s part because I would’ve missed out on — yes, I’ll quote the blurb — “nothing less than a superb novel.”

    Of course all of this is preamble to what I really want to tell you about.

    Story

    Don is a discharged Vietnam veteran working through the trauma of his terrible time in that war. He’s rented the Timberlake Farm in New England (no, down, down, Stephen! I’ll walk you later) with his wife, Connie, and his son, Toby. They’re the very picture of a well-adjusted, loving family, and Don seems to be on the mend, barring a few phantoms from the war.

    Don’s also a writer (down, Stephen! Later, I said!).

    Even when a blizzard covers the farm in deep snow, the three of them take it in stride, keen to enjoy a cozy winter together. Don and Connie make saucy comments and try to figure out how to have an intimate moment with Toby in the house. The cuteness is almost too much to bear.

    Then Toby finds this strange track in the snow.

    “Starting with the feet.” — Roanoke Gaming

    This is, as the kids say, sus. It’s like no animal track Don has ever seen before. It’s fun seeing him do these mental gymnastics trying to explain what kind of creature made it, because it’s exactly the kind of thing anyone would do when faced with the unknown.

    Pretty soon, other things start to go wrong: livestock winds up dead, the phone lines are cut, and strange yellow eyes peer in at Don and his family from the ground floor windows. They all begin to suspect something is out there, stalking them. But why doesn’t it come inside? And why have all the outbuildings on the farm begun to smell so heavily of ammonia?

    The buildup of suspense is masterful.

    Would You Like to Know More?

    Barry Malzberg‘s introduction to the book makes particular mention of Aaron Wolfe/Dean Koontz’s credits in Escapade, Virginia Quarterly, and Alfred Hitchcock’s Mystery Magazine. Hitchcock‘s in particular has historically been a showcase of some of the best rising talents in mystery and suspense, so I’m not at all surprised to hear Koontz cut his teeth there.

    As the threat builds, Don’s memories of the war resurface. He partook of some grisly hand-to-hand combat, and the terror of those events never left him. He elucidates the lessons he learned on pages 104 to 105. This is one of my favourite passages from the book. I call it The Death Poem.

    Death is real and final.

    Death is not a release from suffering.

    Death is not a blessing.

    Death is not a mystery.

    Death is not a solution.

    Death is not a trip to heaven.

    Or to hell.

    Or to limbo.

    Or to nirvana.

    Or to (fill in your favourite paradise).

    Death is not a oneness with Nature.

    Or with God.

    Or with the universe.

    Death is not reincarnation.

    Death does not just happen to other people.

    Death is not just what the villain deserves.

    Death is not just a novelist’s device.

    Death is not heroic.

    Death is not just for the movies.

    Death is not just a stage we go through.

    Death is not mutable.

    Death is not beatable.

    Death is not cheatable.

    Death is not a joke.

    Death. Is. Real. And. Final.

    Final.

    Forever.

    And that’s it.

    This is the second hardest mic drop I’ve encountered in the Laser Books.

    The first… is also in Invasion, on the very last page.

    Lines from the above poem recur with ever-increasing frequency as the tension rises and the threat closes in on Don and his family. He does not fear death for himself, but is terrified at the prospect of losing his wife or son and having to live with the memory of that.

    He also isn’t completely honest with them about how deeply the war affected him, or how it changed his worldview, and that latent anxiety becomes a new enemy he must contend with in addition to the aliens.

    After a couple days of mounting terror, Don makes the difficult decision to hike to the Johnsons’ house and use their phone. They’re a couple miles away and the snow is only getting deeper, but by this point he is forced to admit that something inhuman out there is hunting him and his family.

    The one question he can’t answer is… why don’t these creatures simply march into the house and kill them all?

    He gets a big clue at the neighbours’ house. He finds them both dead, with the phone lines cut and, most crucially, the heat off. Don beats a hasty retreat back to Connie and Toby, having reasoned out what’s going on. His memories from the war have kicked in and the pattern of strange occurrences finally makes sense:

    • Cutting the communication lines
    • Foraging for food
    • Eliminating isolated groups
    • Close observation

    It’s the exact playbook of an advance reconnaissance force, and you only deploy recon for one reason:

    Planning an invasion.

    The Aliens

    New England vacay with the lads.

    Dean Koontz may have cut his teeth in mystery and suspense, but he shows an aptitude and a love of science fiction with his aliens.

    While the principle solvent in the human body, and the compound of which we are mostly made, is H2O (water), the principle compound that comprises the aliens is NH3 — ammonia — which has a melting point of −77.73 °C and boiling point of −33.34 °C.

    The coldest winter on Earth is just barely tolerable for the aliens. The ideal temperature range for humans indoors is generally between 18 and 22 °C, depending on individual preference. To the aliens, that would be like standing inside an oven.

    There’s a phenomenal scene when the aliens shut down power to the farmhouse and break in, and Don watches as their bodies literally start boiling off of them as the ammonia sublimates into gas.

    Would You Like to Know More?

    I love depictions of alien life with alternative biochemistries, or even the absence thereof. Silicon-based life was popularized in the Star Trek TOS episode “The Devil in the Dark” with the Horta, and has since remained a staple of science fiction. The Changelings of Deep Space Nine are also an incredibly strange and wonderful form of life that appears carbon based, but probably have so much more going on.

    My favourite non-carbon-based alien life form, however, is the Hiss from Remedy‘s Control.

    The Hiss is hard to describe. It’s a “resonance-based entity” so it exists primarily as a sort of signal, radio wave, or vibration. It came crashing through the walls of our reality from a parallel universe, and its been doing this dimension hopping for God knows how long, taking over who knows how many cultures in its wake.

    It’s like a virus in the way it takes control of the people, places, and things it passes through. And when you become possessed, you act like a modem or relay, infecting others with the Hiss signal.

    But it’s also adaptable like a full-fledged organism. When it encounters something that resists infection, it takes those it possessed — usually soldiers and security guards — and “activates” them, sending them into battle to destroy the one resisting, or subdue them so that they can be overwhelmed by a more powerful burst of the signal later on.

    And resisting only makes things worse: the Hiss is an interdimensional force with loads of shit that it acquired over its time roaming the multiverse, including the supernatural weapons of fallen civilizations. It can and will throw the arsenals of whole planets — including some Lovecraftian monstrosities — at you if you fight it hard enough.

    Oh and the best part? Any single ability or weapon the Hiss acquired can, eventually, be uploaded to all its soldiers.

    Basically, unless you’re Jesse Faden, or the Dark Presence, your one choice with the Hiss is when you’re ready to give in. I can’t really think of another sci-fi property with a “sound-based life form.”

    SPOILERS!

    Hey, we haven’t had one of these sections since Seeds of Change!

    So, as is typical with these alien arrival stories, the visitors from space are here to gauge our evolutionary development and find out if we present a threat. Is coexistence possible? Can’t we all just get along?

    In the final chapters of the book, Connie is killed by one of the aliens’ venomous stingers and Toby is telepathically possessed in order to communicate with Don. Since Don’s a writer, they want him to write a book recounting the whole alien encounter from his point of view, so the aliens can understand how humans see them.

    So yeah, the whole book is basically a seven-day retrospective on a First Contact event gone horribly awry.

    Would You Like to Know More?

    Fiiine, Stephen, I’ll give you a walk.

    The framing devices of Invasion, the family-man protagonist, the oppressive winter storm, and the constant taunting of the aliens also put me in mind of Stephen King’s stories. He does that a lot in his books: frames the entire tale as a recollection by a writer and an outline of the lessons that man learned, but the one in particular I’m thinking of is Storm of the Century.

    This is tying back to the start of this review re: all the comparisons you could make between King and Koontz. I just find it funny that from 1999 to 2001, King retread so much of the same ground Koontz did in 1975 with Invasion.

    Don writes the book in three days, and gives it to the aliens, and the aliens give him back his son… and another gift.

    This legitimately knocked my socks off.

    The aliens turned and stalked out of the room.

    They were finished with me, and they never looked back.

    Toby said, “Dad? What’s going on here? I’m scared.” His voice trembled.

    “It’s over,” I assured him. I picked him up and hugged him. “There’s nothing to be afraid of now.”

    “Where’s Mom?”

    “Let’s go find her,” I said, a lump rising in my throat.

    I carried him upstairs.

    She was sitting up in bed when we got there. She was as beautiful as ever. “Don?”

    “I’m here.”

    “Toby?”

    “Hi, Mom.”

    Death is not final.

    — Pages 189-190

    I did not see that coming.

    The whole tone of the book right up to the end has been dark, and each moment affirmed Don’s bleak worldview. The aliens fucked up his life, tore his heart out, threatened his son, but at least he could cling to that small certainty that life is finite and death is final.

    And then the aliens resurrect his wife like it’s nothing.

    Don’s orderly world is upended on the last page, and the last two paragraphs he writes feel like a man coming to terms with his own insanity. It’s a happy ending, but it’s the kind of happy that comes from accepting there is no meaning in the world. The rules don’t apply, and never did. Don was delusional the whole time.

    This ending is disturbing because it confronts us with a world where life and death are freely given and bartered for. The end doesn’t have to be The End. But we only value our earthly time because we believe it to be finite.

    Would we still value life if it were not finite?

    Conclusions and Recommendations

    I read that Dean Koontz soured on Invasion for the same reason that other Laser Books authors soured on their works: Roger Elwood did a lot of cutting-down to meet the guidelines set out by Harlequin. I can only imagine that Koontz would’ve doubled down on the passion between Don and Connie and extended the book to draw the tension out like a blade. He keeps saying he might pick up Invasion and republish it as it was meant to be, like Tim Powers did with The Skies Discrowned, but it’s been over fifty years, so I don’t know how likely that is.

    I’m saddened to hear he doesn’t like the book because it is truly an incredible novel. I still can’t believe it’s one of the Laser Books. Playing within the rigid guidelines, Koontz somehow came out with a story that could stand all on its own. And like I said at the start, he even beat Stephen King to the Dreamcatcher scenario of “alien invasion in the snow.”

    No notes at all.

    My Goodreads Review

    This is my first five-star Laser Book review, and it is well earned. Dean Koontz, writing as Aaron Wolfe, wrote an “alien invasion in the snow” story a full 25 years before Stephen King wrote Dreamcatcher, but whereas Dreamcatcher is a hot mess, Invasion is a suspense story as chilling as an Alberta Clipper, with deep musings on life, death, family, and meaning in the cosmos. I can recommend this book heartily and without any reservation. It is a killer tale.

    Well, death may not be final, but this review has certainly reached its end, and so I bid a teary-eyed farewell to Dean Koontz, a.k.a. Aaron Wolfe, and look to our next Laser Book.

    Who’s Next?

    Ladies and gentlemen, let’s give a warm welcome to our favourite spinner of time travel yarns, Gordon Eklund! So happy to have you back so soon, bud! We’re really eatin’ good with the last few Laser Books. Let’s check out the blurb.

    Blurb

    As a mercenary soldier of fortune, Calvin Waller has grown used to danger. Danger is the air he breathes. But when he finds himself thrown from the midst of an African battle into a primitive farm community of the future, he is naturally disoriented. Trained as he is, he quickly gets his bearings and begins a new and different battle…only to be “thrown” again. He is being manipulated. Falling Toward Forever, is the story of his search for The Manipulator, and for himself. A strange and wonderful search…for The Manipulator holds all the strings.

    I’m tremendously excited to see what other temporal twists Eklund can cook up after Serving in Time! See y’all soon!

    Public Service Announcement

    The Laser Book reviews will be switching from a weekly to a bi-weekly upload schedule. This is so that I can devote more time to editing my novel, Seekers of the Fallen Stars, to stay on track for a 2027 publishing date.

    In theory, I could keep releasing the Laser Books Reviews on a weekly basis, but their quality would suffer and I would soon run into the very real issue that I’ve not yet read all of them. At time of writing, I’m about halfway through 16. Kane’s Odyssey. That still leaves 42 titles I have to get through, and I do want to read and write other things over the course of this year.

    The quality and length of the Laser Books Reviews depends on two factors:

    • The quality of the book I’m discussing
    • The kinds of jokes and discussion topics I’m able to pull in based on who the author is

    For example, the Seeklight review was one of my favourites to write because of K.W. Jeter’s Star Wars connection. I could make so many references and jokes based on that. That’s the kind of review I want to deliver every time, and so I need time in order to keep that up.

    The good news is, you’ll be getting Laser Books reviews up through next year, and in the off-weeks, I may have a chance to talk about other books I’ve read or projects I’m working on. Ultimately, my novels and short stories take precedence over this blog, but if I can consistently deliver quality work on both fronts by giving myself more time, I will do that.

    Excellence, in all things! I’ll see you guys in two weeks!

  • Laser Books Review 8

    Laser Books Review 8

    8. Caravan by Stephen Goldin

    We’ve had one, yes, but what about second Goldin?

    Yes, dear readers, I am delighted to say that the author of the fantastic Columbo-style howcatchem Herds has returned with a new yarn, this time the tale of a nightmare road trip across doomsday America.

    If you haven’t read my review of… wait a second.

    *Squints*

    Well, I’ll be damned!

    I completely forgot that I bought this at Re: Reading on the Danforth!

    What a lovely day this is turning out to be. It’s little things like this that make life worth living.

    It’s my sincere pleasure to introduce you all to my favourite place to shop for used books in my hometown of Toronto. Re: Reading has everything: a juicy selection of genre fiction, rare first editions from the likes of James Clavell and Frank Herbert, complete TV series on DVD, but my personal favourite is the shelf in the Quantum Unicorn: Science Fiction Fantasy Chamber filled with back issues of SFF magazines dating to the 1950s.

    You wouldn’t believe some of the things they’ve got here! Old issues of Galaxy with some of Herbert’s earliest short stories, copies of Analog containing the first appearances of the Strugatsky Brothers in English, and issues of The Magazine of Fantasy and Science Fiction stuffed with original cinema and science columns penned by Harlan Ellison and Isaac Asimov. Buy three, get the fourth free!

    And I have.

    God help my reading list, but I have…

    This isn’t even all of it…

    But wait there’s more! When I asked Christopher, the proprietor, if he had any Laser Books, he said, “Yeah, I think we have a couple.”

    A couple? Try a couple dozen!

    Unfortunately, most of them were copies of books already in my collection, but Caravan was one of those I was missing, so I was pleased as punch walking out of the store that day.

    Man, fifteen bucks to get multiple original publications of some of the best sci-fi authors ever. What a magical place. If you’re ever in Toronto, or if you live there but have never visited Re: Reading, you can find them on the Danforth between Pape and Chester, closer to Pape than Chester. There’s parking one block north. Tell Christopher I sent you.

    Where was I? Ah yes!

    If you haven’t read my review of Herds — I mean, you should have, but in case you didn’t — I won’t get into the meat of that novel here. Instead, I’ll just briefly outline Goldin’s style:

    • Straightforward, unadorned prose
    • Simple characters with easily understood motivations
    • Scathing social commentary

    Herds in particular stands out in my memory for deconstructing several Golden Age of Sci-fi myths about society, chief among which is the nature of credibility: who has it and why.

    Herds currently stands as my second-favourite of the Laser Books, behind Serving in Time. I’m eager to find out where Caravan sits in the pack, but of course, as we all know, we must first weigh the work of Kelly Freas.

    Eh, it’s a bit of a step back from Seeklight in its use of negative space. I understand Freas is trying to imply the barren solitude of post-collapse America, but I don’t remember seeing much snow in Caravan. The burned-out husks of vehicles, the titular Caravan barreling down cracked and crumbling highways, and the gunfights in the gas stations and motels are the deepest impressions the book left in my mind.

    More Mad Max, less Mount Everest.

    Yes, there’s a spaceship, but you don’t see it till very late in the book when the caravan’s purpose is revealed. I don’t dislike it as much as Crash Landing on Iduna or Gates of the Universe, but like… come on.

    The most I can say is that Caravan’s cover doesn’t make me nauseated.

    The real star of this cover is the dude in the doo rag, Kudjo Wilson. He’s drawn with such personality, and the expression in his eyes could be anything from suspicion to hope to unease. Kudjo’s a guard for the caravan — a bad mofo in the parlance of the inner city. He’s the kind of black man white southern Americans have nightmares about: fiercely independent, loyal to his kin, and extremely handy with a switchblade.

    When the cops show up at Kudjo’s house, they’re the ones who leave in body bags.

    So, on the cover as well as in the book, Kudjo’s really carrying the day. I’ll give points for the portrait, even if the overall composition is lackluster.

    *Sigh*

    Do we have to? We all know Marketing Guy fucked it up, can we not just skip this bit? No? Fiiiine.

    Blurb

    When Peter Stone wrote his book, “World Collapse,” he thought he was just describing possible trends his book might help avoid. But not only did the collapse come, everyone blamed Stone for it, because he had predicted it. He is rescued from the angry mob by a caravan of “idealists.” The caravan’s leader, Honon, is the most idealistic, practical, hardened, lovable leader to come along in many a year… and it is only his belief in his dreams that enables the caravan to reach the starship. Stone had never predicted this!

    Holy shit… it’s actually good?! How?! How did this happen? Did Marketing Guy get replaced between books? Is this MG 2.0?

    Okay, straight up, not a word of a lie, I’d buy this book, and I’ll tell you why.

    Growing up as a child of the early 2000s, I was a devotee of Al Gore. I watched The Day After Tomorrow too many times to count. I truly believed that radical changes in the climate were just around the corner. And then… they weren’t. Of course, they were happening, just not on the time scales predicted.

    Later, I read Michael Crichton‘s novel State of Fear and became a closeted climate realist. I believed the carbon footprint idea was a government deception like the Red Scare and the War on Terror in order to distract and control people.

    Would You Like to Know More?

    It turns out I was half right. BP Oil created the notion of a carbon footprint to shift the blame for catastrophic emission levels onto the general public. The result was a sort of mass-flagellation that any student of history would immediately find familiar:

    When life is getting worse for the Everyman, tell him he can fix it by depriving himself of the things he wants and becoming an ascetic, and get him to shame anyone who won’t do the same. Thus the real culprits get off the hook.

    I tell you all this because the resentment I felt toward people like Al Gore is something I saw reflected in many people throughout the 2010s. There was a cancerous belief that the prophets of science had failed us. That oft-repeated refrain of, “It will happen. Maybe not on the timescale we predicted, but it will happen” became hateful to a great many people, myself included.

    Obviously, I’ve got my head on straight now, and that’s why this blurb intrigues me.

    How would the world treat a prophet who lived long enough to see his prediction come true?

    Humans always shoot the messenger, despite all adages to the contrary. And as the 21st Century matures and brings with it all manner of climate catastrophes, will we change our attitudes toward the climate scientists we’ve spat on and disregarded for so long, or will we ultimately hold them responsible, either for speaking too loudly or doing too little, to stop climate change?

    Story

    Caravan posits a world where overpopulation has led to societal collapse. Peter Stone, the protagonist, predicted this in his book, “World Collapse.” Each chapter begins with a real-life news article, and a page from Stone’s book commenting on the societal phenomenon in the article.

    Would You Like to Know More?

    We’ve had one, yes, but what about second Stone?

    Yep, if you’re keeping track, this is the second Laser Book with a protagonist named Stone, the first being Thomas F. Monteleone‘s Seeds of Change (check out my review for that here).

    Let’s go for the hat trick, Roger Elwood. One more Stone! One more Stone!

    The pages written by Stone (which in fact are written by Goldin) read less like a non-fiction book about societal phenomena and more like a YouTube commenter trying to sound intelligent by regurgitating concepts they kinda sorta understand, but have no intention of doing anything about.

    Slacktivism, in another word.

    Reading his passages, I actually find myself sympathizing a little bit with the other people in the world.

    Would You Like to Know More?

    The premise of Goldin’s book is that overpopulation will lead to collapse, but in the last two decades, it’s begun to look like underpopulation, or demographic collapse, is the greatest threat facing the nations of the world. With the cost of living rising to an exorbitant level, it’s very difficult to raise children, and with a decline in population comes an inability to exploit and distribute a country’s resources.

    Gas stations run dry.

    People can’t drive to the grocery store.

    Those with no support systems like family or friends begin to die off.

    Populations shrink faster.

    Buildings sit empty.

    Nature begins reclaiming cities.

    What’s so eerie about Goldin’s depiction of America is that he absolutely nailed what the country — and indeed the Earth — would look like if demographic collapse occurs on a widespread scale: ghost cities, silent suburbs, and decaying highways, all primed for plants and animals to retake them.

    The story begins with Stone trying to find sanctuary in an America where police have turned into gangs, people shoot each other over gasoline, and the government has abdicated all responsibility to its people.

    Basically the modern United States.

    Scarcity of resources and Stone’s reputation as a doomsayer means he’s always turned away by the gated societies that still survive. Leaving one of these societies in despair, he is set upon by a group of kids who recognize him, and blame him for their present circumstances. Just before they can really work him over, Kudjo Wilson shows up and gets medieval on the kids asses, saving Stone’s life.

    Kudjo belongs to a caravan, a group of armed men and women criss-crossing the country gathering what resources they can, and delivering it to a launch site in the Carlsbad Caverns. From there, a splinter of the US Government launches spacecraft to carry what’s left of humanity to the stars. The leader of the caravan, Honon, invites Stone to join them. With nowhere else to go, Stone accepts.

    Would You Like to Know More?

    Honon invites Stone to join the caravan because Stone is a cynic; as Honon says, “Every cynic is just an optimist who’s been knocked around one too many times.” This is actually a central theme of the book: why does anyone go on living if they believe there is no hope left in the world? Are we just hardwired to choose life, or deep down, in our heart of hearts, do we all preserve a spark of hope that things will get better?

    Many moral conundrums ensue as they drive westward across the country, including a question of whether or not to chase down and punish a group of raiders who attacked a defenceless settlement and raped a woman. Some of the sequences in this book can be truly brutal, and Goldin pushes the envelope of the Laser Books in the violence he depicts.

    The caravanners are not much better than raiders themselves: they believe their mission of preserving humanity entitles them to steal from anyone they want and take on the mantle of judge, jury, and executioner when they feel it necessary. But Goldin again demonstrates nuance when he shows the internal struggles of the caravanners with their role.

    Honon is a complicated leader: he pursues his goals doggedly, but questions himself at every turn. He remains strong for his people, but isn’t above saying, “This moral dilemma is too big for me to decide alone. You all should have a say.” He believes criminals should be punished, but isn’t totally comfortable meting out justice at gunpoint just because there’s no other option in a lawless world. Honon tries to be pro-social in a world where societies frequently fall victim to infighting, powerplay, or each other.

    Caravan’s Best Scene

    There’s a woman in the caravan Stone falls for: Risa. She left her neighbourhood when she was little and hasn’t seen her mother since.

    The route the caravan takes brings them close to Risa’s neighbourhood, and she and Stone take a detour. They find her mother’s house and it’s… empty.

    This is such a crushing moment to read because it makes the collapse of society deeply personal. What if you left home, and came back to find it utterly abandoned, silent, empty? What if you came home hoping for just one last hug from your mother only to find her gone — not dead, but vanished?

    I can only imagine this is the experience many Ukrainians will have when the war with Russia finally ends; people will go back to their homes, looking for their parents, and find, if not craters, deserted suburbs, picked over by scavengers.

    It’s a really bleak scene and hits harder than most material in the Laser Books ever does.

    Stone transforms in a big way by the end of the book. He regains his sense of optimism and devotes himself to building a new life out amongst the stars with Risa, whom he marries on the last page. It’s a weirdly optimistic ending considering all that’s come before, and I can’t imagine any other sci-fi novelist from this period doing the same, but it’s the Laser Books, so whatever.

    Conclusions and Recommendations

    With Herds we’ve got a Columbo episode and with Caravan we’ve got Mad Max. Both these books work because they examine the personal cost of extraordinary events happening to ordinary people.

    But as with Herds, I think Goldin could’ve gone further in exploring the inner life of his protagonist. Stone feels too much like a casual observer to events. What did he lose in the collapse? What did it cost him? These are the things I need to know. Again, Goldin’s female character, Risa, holds more promise in her character arc than Stone, but is held back by being a secondary character.

    My Goodreads Review

    Caravan is striking because it depicts a post-apocalyptic America which is far closer than people think — not because of overpopulation, as the book suggests, but demographic collapse, which many countries now face. Some of this imagery will haunt me for years. The social commentary isn’t as deep as Goldin’s previous entry in the Laser Books, Herds, but it’s still enough to tickle your brain.

    We must now bid farewell to Stephen Goldin once again, and this time for a long while. We won’t see his name until Laser Book 25, Scavenger Hunt, near the middle of this series. I’m keen to see what he cooks up then.

    Brr… is it getting chilly in here?

    Who’s Next?

    YEEEEEESS!!!

    That my friends is the sound of the angels singing rapturous harmony. Next Monday is gonna be a watershed moment in the Laser Books, because our next title is Invasion by Aaron Wolfe.

    If that name doesn’t ring a bell, it’s because it’s a pen name for an author you’ve almost certainly heard of.

    An author of over 140 published novels and 74 short stories.

    An author who’s sold over 500 million books.

    An author with a net worth of $200 million.

    An author by the name of…

    Dean Koontz.

    And he has written the first five-star Laser Book.

    Blurb

    Barry Malzberg says that Invasion “is simply one of the most remarkable first novels in any field that I have ever read.” The English critic, Philip Pollock says that it is “quite genuinely spine-chilling, well-written… with a twist to the ending which I like very much…” (but we can’t reveal the ending). He goes on to say that “in any collection of SF there has to be one tale such as this, and I think it might probably be difficult to find another one of quite this calibre.” Difficult indeed! Invasion is nothing less than a superb novel.

    I’m not even going to harp on the fact that, like Seeklight, this is another critics’ blurb, because for once, ladies and gentlemen, the critics are absolutely correct.

    Dig out your snowshoes and zip up your parkas. Next Monday brings a blizzard…

    … and terror.

  • Laser Books Review 7

    Laser Books Review 7

    7. Seeklight by K.W. Jeter

    Jeter, Jeter, pumpkin-eater.

    Now we’re on to a book from an author of Star Wars tie-in stories whose name sounds like the callsign of a TIE/In starfighter.

    As mentioned in my review of Gordon Eklund‘s Serving in Time, K.W. Jeter came up through the ranks with James P. Blaylock and Tim Powers. They all met in the English program at Cal State Fullerton and became close friends, publishing poetry in the English department’s periodical under the name William Ashbless, who later became a recurring character in Powers’ books.

    Would You Like to Know More?

    William Ashbless is basically the Glup Shitto of the Blaylock/Powers/Jeter-verse.

    His biggest claim to fame seems to be The Bounty Hunter Wars, a SW sequel series depicting Boba Fett‘s escape from the Sarlacc‘s stomach and fight to make a name for himself in the post-Imperial era. Sounds like a terrific plot that a certain Maori actor would make a meal out of.

    Would You Like to Know More?

    “There’s always a bit of truth in legends.” — Ahsoka Tano, Star Wars: Rebels, Episode 221, “Twilight of the Apprentice: Part 1”

    I’m going to say something that will earn me more enemies than Prince Xizor: I applauded Disney for binning the expanded Star Wars universe into the Legends label.

    Lets be brutally honest: the Star Wars EU was a slapdash, haphazard, derivative mess. It was developed in a panic by 20th Century Fox five minutes after A New Hope came out and they realized that this weird little money sink was actually going to be a watershed moment in cinema. So they hired a bunch of sci-fi writers and cobbled something together.

    Most of the EU was bad, a lot of it was contradictory, and the really good stories to come out of it did so in spite of the Star Wars label, not because of it. And while I’m slaughtering this sacred cow, I’ll add that Star Wars itself is a derivative mess; scratch the paint, and you’ll find Dune, Foundation, and a half-dozen Kurosawa films underneath. My brother Sean described it perfectly: “Star Wars is a gateway drug to better sci-fi.”

    So when Disney axed the EU, I thought it was a masterstroke. They freed themselves from being stuck with the ball-and-chain called “canon” and could then cherry-pick the best stories to come out of the EU.

    Of course, that was assuming Disney would then cherry-pick the best stories to come out of the EU, and here was a wrinkle I did not anticipate: Kathleen Kennedy. Man, that woman had no idea what she was doing…

    I’d say it’s a good thing Dave Filoni was there to pick up the pieces but even he seems to be losing the plot these days.

    I digress.

    My point is, Disney should’ve looked to writers like Jeter and Timothy Zahn, whose respective Bounty Hunter and Thrawn Trilogy provided the perfect roadmap to writing a sequel trilogy. The stories were already a hit with fans, and Dave Filoni could’ve punched up the writing and drama.

    But there’s not much chance of righting the ship these days.

    Goodreads lists Jeter as having contributed tie-in work to Star Trek: Deep Space Nine (my beloved) and Blade Runner as well, but Seeklight is his first novel. Since Jeter is usually known for his work-for-hire books, I’m keen to see what his earliest efforts entailed.

    But the Padawan must wait, for Master Freas is speaking!

    Cover

    “I’ve got a really good feeling about this.” — Han, Solo: A Star Wars Story

    Something tells me this story’s gonna be really upbeat with lots of love, hugs, and mutual acceptance. What a lovely change of pace!

    Even the robot agrees with me!

    Seriously now: this is Freas’s most striking cover yet. The red background is the first thing you notice. It’s so nauseating to look at! This is a good use of negative space. Instead of a flat field, Freas gives the red background a subtle texture like clotted blood, which fits this story really well because Seeklight deals with violence, both immediate and generational.

    The other thing the background reminds me of is the Warp from Warhammer 40,000 or hyperspace from Babylon 5. Both are spaces which hide Lovecraftian nightmares, and neither are wholly safe to traverse. The spaceships superimposed over it are blurred, implying that they’re travelling at great speed, as if fleeing something hiding just outside our field of view.

    The next thing that catches the eye is the Regent–the robot priest. Everything about this guy screams “intelligent”: the book, the threadbare hem of his habit, the way he sticks his pinky out, the subtle “fuck you” in his scan cell eyes. This is a guy who looks like he knows what’s what, like he’s in on some kind of big secret (which he most certainly is). The way the ragged hem of his garments subtly bleeds into the background implies he is part and parcel of the violence of this world. He looks ancient, powerful, and merciless. Such a great translation of a character design from page to art!

    And lastly, we have the Lady Marche in the portrait bottom-right. Her design is handsome if plain, but it’s the expression on her face that’s of note. She looks perturbed, frightened even, as if she knows something terrible is coming.

    All in all, this is one of Freas’s most interesting covers so far. Most pieces of art (cover art, certainly) draw your eye to a character or location in the foreground, and only then do you investigate the deeper layers. Freas inverts this: the eye is instantly captivated with that blood-clot background, and roves over the texture, exploring every bulge and fold. And only once the eye has been satiated by this horror show does it start pulling back through the layers, seeing the spaceships, the Regent, and Lady Marche. This is such subtle, inventive work on Freas’s part, and he still manages to capture or evoke all the crucial elements of the novel! Truly excellent.

    Blurb

    Barry Malzberg calls Seeklight one of the three or four best science fiction novels he has ever read by an author new to the field. The world Seeklight creates is extraordinary. The English critic, Philip Pollock, says Seeklight is a “straightforward, highly imaginative, very well told story. It falls into the class that I rate as ‘a jolly good read’. As the crime novel critics say ‘I couldn’t put it down’.” He concludes his review by saying, “For a first novel it has remarkable selfpossession and professionalism and I enjoyed it very much indeed.” There is no doubt that you will too.

    Oof. I’m always leery of book blurbs that quote what others have said about the story without saying anything about the story itself. I don’t care how high the praise is. I need to know about the world and the characters so I can make an informed decision about whether to buy the book.

    Now, I know it’s common practice to include quotes from other well-known authors on a book cover/jacket, but we don’t have that luxury or space when it comes to Laser Books, so I wouldn’t buy this based on the blurb.

    Story

    “It’s not a story the Jedi would tell you.” — Sheev

    Fans of Dune and Star Wars will immediately find parallels within Seeklight: a young noble loses his only family and goes on the run with some blue collar workers. In the end he chooses to pursue his birthright and confront the dark history of his family.

    But I’m getting ahead of myself.

    Seeklight begins with an introduction and a prologue. The introduction is written by SF (or s-f, as he writes it) veteran Barry Malzberg.

    Would You Like to Know More?

    In researching this review, I learned that Malzberg become one with the Force fairly recently, in December of 2024. In the obituary on the SFWA website, Author Robert J. Sawyer says of Malzberg:

    “Barry N. Malzberg was a true mensch. He believed fervently in the power of science fiction and fought for it to transcend being a commercial category of mere escapism. The field has lost not only one of its greatest authors but also one of its fiercest champions.”

    I don’t know much about Malzberg, but this endears me to him. Sci-fi is still, even in the post-2001, –Trek, –Star Wars era, spat upon by literary writers, critics, and audiences, despite the fact it is beloved by millions upon millions of people of all ages, creeds, and colours around the world.

    The prologue is simply an excerpt from a chapter later on in the novel.

    Seeklight is set on a human colony far from Earth. Human genetic material was sent here and shepherded to life by robots from the spacecraft that touched down. Daenek, our protagonist, is the son of an assassinated thane and is treated like an outsider for the perceived crimes of his father.

    What struck me initially is that the opening chapters of the story play out much more like a traditional fantasy novel: An orphan prince is raised by a wise female with forbidden knowledge and secrets, is forced to leave his home, go on the run, falls in with a found family, but ultimately leaves them in search of his heritage.

    Magic and technology are indistinguishable in this world because no one can quite remember what the dividing line is between the two; there’s a hint of Stephen King‘s Dark Tower series in the depiction of an advanced world gone to decay, corruption, and forgetfulness.

    It is in these motifs that we see the pedigree that will earn Jeter a place amongst the Star Wars tie-in novelists: his blending of mystique and technology is a staple of the Galaxy Far, Far Away.

    In Seeklight, the decay of the world is the result of the Dark Seed, a piece of genetic coding which manifests as a subtle apathy in all the people of this world. Things don’t get fixed, no one aspires to anything, and when misfortune occurs, everyone just accepts it. Daenek isn’t spared, and I was legitimately surprised with how Jeter manifested the Dark Seed in his protagonist.

    Would You Like to Know More?

    It isn’t by chance that the Dark Seed proliferated across the planet. The robots who were built to be caregivers, protectors, and teachers to the human colonists decided they could do a better job of running the place, and so they threaded the Dark Seed throughout the population. Over time, people would become so disaffected and apathetic that the robots would just take over by default, because no one could be arsed to lift a finger to govern.

    Humanity brings about its own genocide through sheer laziness.

    In a typical narrative like this, the hero confronts the evil festering at the heart of the world, rallies people together, and puts right what once went wrong. Jeter makes you think that Daenek will rise above the Dark Seed and fix things, but he doesn’t.

    At the end of the novel, Daenek confronts the Regent (the ruling robot) and learns just how extensive the Dark Seed’s corruption is. He claims his birthright, but decides that no amount of personal or political power is enough to stop the robots, and so he simply… leaves.

    Daenek, son of the Thane, the man entrusted to safeguard the people, falls victim to the Dark Seed–to apathy, to lack of willpower–and departs his home world. Perhaps he goes to Earth, or another colony that the robots haven’t taken over, but he knows deep down that wherever he goes, he will be a pauper, a street urchin, a nobody. His genetic destiny holds no currency beyond his home world. The Dark Seed holds sway, and the robots claim their planet.

    It reminds me of a quote from one of my favourite plays/films:

    “God made the angels to show Him splendor, as He made animals for innocence and plants for their simplicity. But Man He made to serve Him wittily, in the tangle of his mind. If He suffers us to come to such a case that there is no escaping, then we may stand to our tackle as best we can, and, yes, Meg, then we can clamor like champions, if we have the spittle for it. But it’s God’s part, not our own, to bring ourselves to such a pass. Our natural business lies in escaping.” — Sir Thomas More, A Man for All Seasons

    This quote has stuck with me since I first heard it, because it illuminates and redeems humanity in such a special way. If you turn away from a great moral struggle, it doesn’t make you a coward, it simply means you have not yet found the line you cannot cross. Each of us has a hill we may die on, and we will have no choice about that, simply because our conscience will not permit us to choose otherwise.

    This quote made me a lot more forgiving of people who, as Dante wrote, “Maintain their neutrality in times of moral crisis.” To be human is to want to live, to survive, to escape danger. Before you shame someone for not marching in a demonstration, or standing up to an authority figure, ask yourself: “Would I have the courage to do better?” In most instances, the answer is no, and that’s all right.

    You simply haven’t found your hill yet.

    The ending of Seeklight is brutally honest, and I respect the hell out of Jeter for writing it. Daenek’s decision to escape rings true, and elevates Seeklight above a simple s-f adventure.

    Conclusions and Recommendations

    My Goodreads Review

    While most of the book is not very memorable, and some dialogue falls into the category of “Golden Age Sci-fi Schlock”, Seeklight is elevated by elegant prose and an ending which provides an incisive commentary on human nature. In terms of the Laser Books, I’d still say it’s a 3 out of 5, but that three is strong and very well earned. In other words, Jeter, you are on this council, but we do not grant you the rank of Master.

    Who’s Next?

    Herds author Stephen Goldin steps up to the plate for a second time this series with the novel Caravan. I’m delighted to have him back. Blurb it, baby!

    Blurb

    When Peter Stone wrote his book, “World Collapse,” he thought he was just describing possible trends his book might help avoid. But not only did the collapse come, everyone blamed Stone for it, because he had predicted it. He is rescued from the angry mob by a caravan of “idealists.” The caravan’s leader, Honon, is the most idealistic, practical, hardened, lovable leader to come along in many a year… and it is only his belief in his dreams that enables the caravan to reach the starship. Stone had never predicted this!

    Damn, Marketing Guy, you might’ve actually gotten done good for once!

    So, next week we shall make a pilgrimage back from the fringes of known space to our own backyard, and see what humanity has done with the place. I’m really looking forward to another Goldin title, and I hope you are too. See you there!

    And remember…

    The Force will be with you, always.